Talk:Murder of Asunta Basterra

Dates don’t make any sense
The adoptive parents death dates preceed the death of Asunta. If they killed her, it would be the first supernatural event in history. Dtss2017 (talk) 23:56, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Quality of Writing and Tense Grammar
The general quality of writing is passable, but not praiseworthy, due to a few back and forth changes from present to past tense. These sections usually occur in major blocks and / or paragraphs at a time. 2601:14E:C000:5AA0:F1E0:2F84:E4C4:9F92 (talk) 18:12, 2 May 2024 (UTC)