Talk:Murder of Betsy Aardsma

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Fixed, thanks 198.181.161.250 (talk) 12:06, 10 August 2009 (UTC)djs

Stabbed
The article says she was stabbed, but "so no one had realized she'd been stabbed, and thought perhaps she had a seizure or medical ailment. The identity of the man/men who spoke to the desk clerk has never been determined." Clearly someone at some stage realised she had been stabbed or we wouldn't know she was stabbed in the article. I presume this was discovered in the autopsy, but this isn't clear from the article. Also the time is given in 12 hour format with making it clear if it was am or pm. The fact that she was supposed to be there during office hours and it seems unlikely the library was open at 4am suggests its pm but this isn't clear. Nil Einne (talk) 17:45, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Fixed, thanks! Any other suggestions to help get this pages' quality rating up? 198.181.161.250 (talk) 12:07, 10 August 2009 (UTC) djs

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Not solved "as of today"
I was surprised to see the article had an "as of" information of today and then saw it is just updated automatically. It would be more accurate to use the last date when someone actually checked the information. Does Wikipedia have a general policy for such cases? Omikroergosum (talk) 19:45, 1 August 2018 (UTC)