Talk:Murder of Yusef Hawkins

Revising opening paragraphs
. . . to conform more closely to the actual N.Y. Times news reports.
 * cause of the confrontation
 * no NYT mention of a 'street gang'
 * not all the suspects were of Italian descent
 * the many repetitions of 'Italian-American' make for POV
 * the hyphenated-American background of the entire crowd involved is not known.

Yes, a terrible crime was committed that night, but I think this entire article could stand a POV review. --CliffC 04:58, 9 October 2006 (UTC)

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