Talk:My Life with Master

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Hello Percy. Why change "with" to "With"? Both the author and most players use a lower-case 'w', both in the full title and in the shorter "MLwM". I'm going to change it, but just tell me here if there's a reason for doing it your way and we can talk about it. Jonas Karlsson 16:00, 19 January 2006 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):

Waza (talk) 04:56, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Many thanks for the comments. I will try to deal with them, but unfortunately this review comes right as I am preparing to go away for almost a week.  As I said, I'll try to deal with them as best I can.  Of course, if need be, I can always fix them later and re-nominate the article for GA.  --Craw-daddy | T | 10:42, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Great article. With further expansion to make comrehensive and more work with the style guide I believe this could be raised to a Featured Article. Don't be afraid to use the book of the game itself as a reference if needed, while not good to have it as only or even main reference to the article but I believe it is totally appropriate to use it to support points about the game that may not be brought out in other sources, expecially if it has an introduction or designer notes. - Waza (talk) 03:41, 30 April 2008 (UTC)