Talk:NASA Astronaut Group 4/GA1


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GA Review
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Reviewer: Starsandwhales (talk · contribs) 18:46, 8 June 2019 (UTC)

Cleanup Copyediting Miscellaneous remarks:
 * Article could be clearer if the citations were at the ends of sentences, instead of the ends of phrases. However, this is the editor's choice and doesn't make too much of a difference.
 * The following section(s) need to be copyedited
 * The "Background" section should be copyedited because the many commas in some sentences can make them unclear and/or confusing.
 * The "Group members" section should be copyedited because the location of citations isn't consistent. Again, a minor issue.
 * The "Training" section should be copyedited because of incorrect use of semicolons, and unclear pronoun usage.
 * Some images do not have alt text, and some of them do not have English captions on the commons.


 * Response


 * 1) All sections have been copyedited. Spelling and grammar are correct.
 * 2) The only semicolon in the Training section has been removed.
 * 3) All citations in the Group members section are in the Ref column, as is usual for tables.
 * 4) Alt text is not required, even at FAC level
 * All points have been addressed.  Hawkeye7   (discuss)  20:34, 15 June 2019 (UTC)

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