Talk:Namri Songtsen

Quick Review
Just a few comments on improving the article. It's a good start.
 * It needs more than one reference. I may have something laying around, but I don't know if I'll have time to add anything.
 * Needs a thorough copyedit and rewrite for style issues. I suggest taking it over to the League of Copyeditors and seeing what they can do for you.
 * The sentences are generally very long and should be broken up into clauses or shorter sentences. For example:
 * Expanding his rule to all of modern Central Tibet, including the Lhasa region allowed him to rule over many groups, and to begin the establishment of a centralized and strong state, with skilled troops who gained experience in their many battles in the early 7th century.
 * might become
 * As he extended his rule to all of Central Tibet, he began to establish a strong, centralized state with the help of skilled troops, who had gained experience in the battles of the early seventh century. Or something. I don't really know.--Gimme danger (talk) 17:20, 28 April 2008 (UTC)

Tengri Khan
Can you please write sources about Tengri Khan and him being his son? AA73 (talk) 21:28, 8 December 2022 (UTC)