Talk:Naseem Rana

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Hello,this article has a lot of unsubstantiated and unreliable material, that is neither verified nor supported with proper citations/references. General (r) Rana was certainly not as heroic as depicted/portrayed here, and it seems that this article has been written by the subject himself or someone close to him, primarily as a means of promoting this person. I really believe that some senior and competent and objective editor/s should take a hard look at this article and prune it drastically and realistically.Many thanks. 39.54.61.255 (talk) 04:56, 3 October 2015 (UTC)Col (r) Malik Mumtaz Khan, Pakistan
 * I agree with the above editor. An interesting point I would like to add here, is that the article cites (supposedly) a book by Dr Ayesha Siddiqa a senior researcher at Quaid I Azam University, Islamabad, Pakistan-- this book is supposed to be Military Inc. (published April 2007) which is something of a landmark in Pakistani academia. This book is about the corruption and self-interest in the Pakistan Army and how various senior military officers and, indeed, the whole army mechanism, have looted and continue to loot Pakistan's teetering economy. It has nothing to do with mentioning any military exploits of any generals etc. I wonder where she mentions Gen Rana's exploits as enunciated herein? Rather suspicious. Must check. Hamneto (talk) 05:07, 3 October 2015 (UTC)Hamneto

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