Talk:Nestlé Waters

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Biased?
Does this seem oddly biased and fake to anyone else? As in "nobody cares about your sales figures and history in such a corporate, methodical manner, and we paid someone to write this article for us". Start off first thing with sales figures, and end with "we do charity". I think the first line (and the template) is the only thing that should stay. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.68.144.73 (talk) 08:33, 14 May 2015 (UTC)

Seconed. Add flag for marketing? Frodeseverin (talk) 08:30, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Underrepresentation?
The main external link is to its own official website, while the only other Wikipedia link is for Nestlé Waters North America, Inc. Why aren't there more outside, neutral sources and references? This page also needs a link to the more-thorough Nestle page, which covers more under the subject of controversy and criticisms. For being the "largest bottle water brand in the world," I would hope this global company is fully researched and publicly accounted for. How can this page become more neutral and responsible towards the global water community? What kind of unbiased sources--other than the official website--can attribute towards lengthening this timeline and information board? Are there other companies that work for or against this company? How much did this company spend to buy out other water companies? Why does the wording seem to have a positive tone rather than a neutral, objective tone? Is this page biased or just underrepresented? Wonderwaves (talk) 04:46, 5 November 2016 (UTC)WonderwavesWonderwaves (talk) 04:46, 5 November 2016 (UTC) Wonderwaves (talk) 04:46, 5 November 2016 (UTC)