Talk:Nyönpa

Additions to the lead
Pinging @Skyerise to avoid an edit war. While the lead indeed repeats the body's key facts, it does so in an extremely editorializing way, with wordings such as stands as a testament to the dynamic nature of Tibetan Buddhism, fearless embrace of unconventional practices or inspire understanding of spiritual growth towards greater self-awareness and enlightenment. This is not the kind of NPOV wording expected of an encyclopedic lead. Chaotıċ Enby  (talk · contribs) 21:44, 24 May 2024 (UTC)


 * So, copyedit it? Skyerise (talk) 21:48, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Done. To be fair, I do not wish to offend, but I am surprised that an experienced editor such as yourself would write something that editorializing without copyediting it before. Chaotıċ Enby   (talk · contribs) 22:42, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * That's fair. Must have been having an off day... Still, improvement is usually better than removal. Skyerise (talk) 12:16, 25 May 2024 (UTC)