Talk:Offshore fund

Rewrite
This articles is really bad. It reads like part-advertisement, part-rant. Very little factual information at all. Funds is not really one of my primary practice areas, but unless someone else wants to take it on, then I am going to attempt to at least make it something more pragmatic than the sloppy mess it is right now. --Legis (talk - contribs) 07:55, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
 * OK, it nearly took me 6 months, but I finally got around to doing the rewrite. I am by no means an expert in this field, but that probably makes it easier to try and generate an article which is more accessible to general readership.  I have tried to strip out the marketing fluff and the banal comments, and just tie it more directly to core facts and provide relevant citations.  I am certainly not pretending that it is perfect, but hopefully it is a lot better than it was. --Legis (talk - contribs) 06:22, 1 October 2014 (UTC)

Assessment comment
Substituted at 01:43, 30 April 2016 (UTC)