Talk:Ostrich eggshell beads

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for writing this well-researched article on Ostrich eggshell beads! I see that this was done as part of an WikiEdu course and, as a new page reviewer, wanted to let you know that this is a high-quality page that will make a positive contribution to the encyclopedia. I made some small edits in the lead and fixed the notes, but these are minor. I would also encourage you to take a look at WP:MOSLAYOUT to think about ways in which you could divide up and/or reorganize some of the sections to make your well-written content more accessible to an unfamiliar reader. Overall, impressive work! Please let me know if you have any questions and welcome to Wikipedia.

Ppt91   talk   20:41, 15 April 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your changes and your advice! I will take a look at the resource you linked. I appreciate your review and your time! Bjj5rice (talk) 04:40, 20 April 2023 (UTC)