Talk:Ovda Regio

Feedback from Rob
Nice work. I would add a map of Venus and locate Ovda Regio on it. This may work better as the main image at the top right, as I feel your current one might be better suited for one of the other sections. Also, if you are going to refer to Ovda as a "Regio" in other parts of your text, it would be good to define exactly what a Regio is (is it specifically a crustal plateau?). A few grammatical errors but other than that looks great! Robnarmour1018 (talk) 00:31, 31 March 2015 (UTC)

Shelby
There are quite a few grammatical issues here, but those are pretty easy to fix. The entire last half of your page is pretty much what was already on my page.

Samantha
Not bad. I still see some grammatical issues, but your page does include nice imagery. I wonder if it would be redundant to include models on your page even though they would be the same as Shelby's models. I agree with Rob about possibly putting another image to better showcase the location of the Ovda Region. Otherwise, nice page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mangolava (talk • contribs) 10:09, 31 March 2015 (UTC)