Talk:Pakistani community of London

Article not succint enough
Just looking through some stuff the article is very long winded. i updated the demohraphics section which two or three really long tables, but the social class and education bit should really be summarised imo. i would encourage anyone to have a go, especially if they have some specialisation in education or social studies. I also dont understand the need for the social class section as a whole, one or two lines in the economics section would more than suffice. I check up on this page every few days so if anyones interested in collaborating on this page, just drop a line here. Elraja1988 (talk) 00:26, 22 December 2012 (UTC)

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