Talk:Pauline Redmond Coggs

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 9 January 2020 and 23 May 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kkhu99023, Jaydeshmukh14.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:11, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

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Prof. Feedback: Your reviewers are correct in flagging that sourcing may be an issue -- with wikipedia you want to err on the side of having a citation for every fact so that we can trace it; so it may feel excessive compared to normal writing, but here it's the norm. So you'll need to add those in, even if you're repeating citations, so it's clear what info came from where. In addition, there are more sources out there that you can and should use in order to flesh this out appropriately and in a way that is less likely to be taken down. I did a quick search on lauinger's site and there is a fair amount in there on your person that you should have a look at and include. Also, one of your DOI's is a broken link. --T. Danylevich (talk) 03:48, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Peer-Review:

Your writing is really good and I like how in depth you go on this woman's life and involvement. However, I think you need to add more references and expand your reference list, as I only noticed one reference at the bottom of the page and it wasn't in its own reference category. Also, I think you could benefit from using more in text citations so that you follow the rules of Wikipedia and avoid plagiarism. Other than that, I really enjoyed reading your piece and I think you did a good job of capturing her life and accomplishments. - Sydney Pedraza

I think the writing fits the tone of a Wikipedia cite. I think your group does a great job fleshing out different aspects of her life. However, I think the last section on her personal life should be before her legacy. I think this change would help with the flow of information for the audience. Also, I see that there is only one reference listed. I would recommend adding more citations so you do not violate Wiki's plagiarism rules. I think that you all should make sure that your phrasings do not violate any plagiarism guidelines as well, make sure you are paraphrasing and re-phrasing the information you are using. Overall, the structure, flow, and tone have been implemented well. This page provides plenty of information about Ms. Coggs's life. -Jacob Bernard — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jacobber19 (talk • contribs) 21:37, 10 April 2020 (UTC)