Talk:Pearl Krabs/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 19:22, 15 July 2017 (UTC)


 * Grabbing this for a review. Aoba47 (talk) 19:22, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Comments
 * Add ALT text for the infobox image. Make sure that all of the images have ALT text. And please do not use “refer to caption” as an ALT text.
 * ✅. Added ALT text for all three images on the article.


 * The phrasing in the lead about the mother being one of “the program’s central mysteries” sounds a little odd to me, as it implies to me that the characters are actively searching for an answer to this. I would re-word this part to avoid mis-interpretation as the mother is just never talked about in the show.


 * Link and use the full name of the Sponge Out of Water move in the “Reception” section.


 * Should the “El” be capitalized in “El Instituto Nacional de las Mujeres”?


 * Just for clarification, have there been any other sources on the musical (i.e. sources about the actress’ approach to the role, the producers’/writers’ approach to the character/reviews)? Just wanted to double-check about this.
 * There will most likely be in-depth sources like that once the musical makes its official Broadway debut in November. The sources I have are from the preview period in Chicago, when only Chicago-based critics attended.
 * That is what I thought; thank you for the clarification. Aoba47 (talk) 16:39, 16 July 2017 (UTC)


 * Final comment
 * Wonderful work with this. I honestly do not have many comments. Once my review is addressed, I will pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 20:06, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you for addressing all of my comments. I ✅ this. Aoba47 (talk) 16:39, 16 July 2017 (UTC)