Talk:Perry Como/GA1

This is a nice article that has a few to many wikilinks making it slightly hard to read. Otherwise I'd just pass it immediately.  Mr. R00t   Talk  19:06, 22 August 2010 (UTC)

GA Review
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Reviewer:  Mr. R00t    Talk  18:29, 22 August 2010 (UTC)

Overview
Altogether the page looks like it needs a serious copyedit and some other tweaks. The length looks fairly good and there are definitely enough sources. The Recordings, television, radio, films section would do better as a See Other or See Also section. I'm going to put a checklist of GA criteria that has not been filled. Please use ✅ or ✅ when you have made the necessary update.  Mr. R00t   Talk  18:40, 22 August 2010 (UTC)

GA Criteria

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance: ✅ Seems they've fixed it. That means that the article is now good to go!   Mr. R00t    Talk  20:40, 25 August 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research: I do not see any. All items appear to be well sourced.
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  Some images have questionable copyright tags ✅ We hope (talk) 13:29, 24 August 2010 (UTC)
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  Some images have questionable copyright tags ✅ We hope (talk) 13:29, 24 August 2010 (UTC)
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

What needs to be done
This page looks pretty good and can be brought up to speed pretty quickly.  Mr. R00t   Talk  18:51, 22 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Find out the copyright information for all images found on page
 * Get page to comply with Manual of Style
 * There is a huge problem with licenses for the two images that in the "Hometown honors" section.--GrapedApe (talk) 16:47, 1 September 2010 (UTC)
 * Images have been removed.  Mr. R00t    Talk  17:55, 2 September 2010 (UTC)