Talk:Peter K. Dorhout

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- Nice start. Some things to consider going forward
 * I would switch ACS President (third sentence of lead) with science communication (second sentence), not because it's more interesting or important, but rather, because of how it's phrased, it would fit better at the end of the section
 * I recommend saying something about his contribution to research
 * Say something about outreach and science communication in the body of the article
 * Include the ACS presidency in the body of the article, probably in the Career section. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:57, 14 May 2019 (UTC)