Talk:Phlegmasia cerulea dolens

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 1 February 2021 and 27 February 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Beckgold. Peer reviewers: Medicalcomm.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 06:33, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

My Work Plan
Hello! Here is my work plan for this page:

Mon 2/1

-Familiarize myself with dashboard

-Make wikipedia account

Tues 2/2

-Meet with team to discuss logistics

-Brainstorm topics

-Do wiki trainings

Tues 2/9

-have all resources compiled

-start editing my page

Tues 2/16

-have my article finishes

-start peer review process

Tues 2/23

-finish peer review

-respond to peer review

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Beckgold (talk • contribs) 19:15, 4 February 2021 (UTC)

Peer review of this article: Excellent. Succinctly describes the condition. Helpful that you provided a similar sounding diagnosis to avoid confusion. Lay public may not know what “venous outflow” is.

Consider switching so epidemiology section comes before the etiology section. Can maybe describe more about PE risk in the pathophysiology section. The links out to other wikipedia pages are very helpful too.

Appropriately referenced -great bibliography!

Really clear heading and sub-headings. Great balance of detail with overview.

I learned a lot reading this article. It gave a very clear road map of objective information that would be useful to a variety of readers. Consider changing some language to avoid medical jargon. Medicalcomm (talk) 01:04, 22 February 2021 (UTC)