Talk:Piazzale delle Corporazioni

This article is good, but a little short. Here are some things you should add:

Describe Ostia's location with respect to Rome (If I'm not mistaken, 20 miles down the Tiber) Provide more detail about the types of goods sold. Provide more detail about the guilds, their purpose, and specific examples.

After doing that, you can section off the article into 3 sections, the first describing the market's greater geography and then its geography within the city (i.e. proximity to theater). The other 2 sections would just detail the other two points I've said need expansion.

There are no major grammatical or stylistic issues except that the information is not well-organized (see above about sections).

It seems like you've done the research and can access the information needed to make the article more specific and useful, so keep up the good work.

199.74.93.122 18:20, 15 May 2007 (UTC) Raehan Durlabhji

Sweet criticisms. Are you not aware of how wikipedia works? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 137.113.161.74 (talk) 02:43, 5 May 2008 (UTC)