Talk:Poison Waters

Detail
The article is very heavy on local detail like local event listings. These should be consolidated rather than individually listed, unless the event is of particular importance. czar 16:22, 10 May 2022 (UTC)


 * @Czar Thanks for the copy edit! I see you added a "how" tag re: organizational support. The source says "the list of causes he supports runs deep", so do you have a specific suggestion for improving the article text? --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:35, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi and you're welcome! I would modify that part to whether Cook advocates for, donates towards, or is an activist for those causes, which are all different versions of "support". If it's unknown, then perhaps it's not worth mentioning in the article since it's vague. Ostensibly the article's detail should center on the actions for which Poison Waters is consistently/best known. czar  16:40, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Perhaps, but in the meantime the source says "support" so I've removed the tag. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:12, 18 May 2022 (UTC)