Talk:Predatory imminence continuum

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Bibliography - Potential sources for expanding article
Sboychuk (talk) 15:59, 14 October 2017 (UTC)

Sboychuk (talk) 15:59, 14 October 2017 (UTC)

Expanding this article
I am considering adding several new sections to expand this article. These include: Sboychuk (talk) 22:43, 15 October 2017 (UTC)
 * A section on species-specific defence behaviours.
 * A section on the development of the predatory imminence theory.
 * A section on the different stages of threats and the behaviours that result.
 * A section on research into the function of brain structures in the varying stages of threat.

Peer review
Well done on linking pages when discussing an uncommon term or a term that should be understood by the reader to grasp the concept of predatory imminence continuum. The length of the lead section is good and the material is presented in a neutral tone. You provided a very good list of trustworthy references and cited these references throughout your paragraph. This is just the beginning of the article, but it would be good to see a further breakdown of the spectrum and all the classified steps involved and some examples of species that have been observed to follow this spectrum in the paragraphs to follow. --SarMar (talk) 19:18, 23 October 2017 (UTC)