Talk:Priyanka Chopra/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vensatry (talk · contribs) 05:41, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

Although the article looks pretty good, it is a long way from the GA status. There are some serious sourcing issues such as reliability of sourced used, WP:V, bare references, etc.,


 * Prose
 * WP:LEAD should summarize the whole article. It doesn't talk about her modeling career
 * "Early life" section is too small and is inadequately sourced
 * Brian Kennedy - dab
 * There are a few MOS issues such as usage of italics, TOI, HT and WatchTime needs to be italicised
 * Nothing more is mentioned about her modeling assignments which forms a vital part of her career, rather most of the article talks about her acting career and Music career.
 * "Southern superstar" is superfluous
 * Released dates for her films in the table is not encouraged per MOS
 * No need to mention "Double role" in the notes column


 * Unsourced statements
 * "Chopra also sang playback in the film, singing "Ullathai Killadhe" along with Vijay"
 * "earning her a Filmfare Best Female Debut Award and a nomination for Filmfare Best Supporting Actress Award"
 * "She earned a Filmfare Best Villain Award, becoming the second and last female actor to win the award after Kajol (the category has been retired since 2008). She also received a second nomination for Filmfare Best Supporting Actress Award for the role"
 * The third para of "Initial success and professional setbacks" contains just a single source
 * "Big Brother, also underperformed at the box-office"
 * "She has also signed Apoorva Lakhia's Zanjeer opposite southern superstar Ram Charan Teja who is making his Bollywood debut. It is a remake of the Hindi 1973 film of the same name"
 * The second and third paras of her Music career relies on a single source
 * "When Chopra won the Miss World crown, she became the fifth Indian woman to win the title, and the fourth Indian woman to win in a span of seven years"


 * Referencing
 * "priyankachopra.org" looks like a fan site
 * Refs #1, #83, #84, #103, #107, #121 and #123 are dead
 * Refs #7, #12, #20, #22 are rd
 * Most of the "bollywoodhungama" links appear to be dead
 * What makes "liveindia.com", "IndiaGlitz", "filmicafe", "Movie Talkies", "Entertainment.in.msn.com", "Redhotcurry.com" and "Now Running" reliable
 * Refs #52, #60 are missing publisher/work parameter
 * Most of the Refs starting from #64 to #78 are incomplete
 * Inconsistent format in sourcing
 * Refs #112-#115, #118-#120, #126 use just bare URLS

Check against the GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

This article has a lot of potential of becoming close to GA material in the near future, but certainly not at this satge. Considering the fact that the nominator is inexperienced and not a major contributor atleast to this article, I don't think the issues can very well be handled with in the hold period. Henceforth, I am quick-failing this. I suggest the nominator to consult the regular contributors and go for a peer review before going in for a second nomination. &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  05:41, 26 August 2012 (UTC)