Talk:Production assistant

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): David.schoen, LaraLegath. Peer reviewers: David.schoen, LaraLegath.

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Complaint
I've added the technical template. This article uses a lot of terms like "ADs" or "teamsters" that film-industry insiders know but are very cryptic to outsiders. Rhakan (talk) 03:28, 28 December 2012 (UTC)

Questions
Here are some questions that came to my mind while reading the article: --Murata (talk) 21:19, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
 * How many PAs work for one film? (I know that probably varys a lot but I can't even figure out the range)
 * Are they trained or qualified in any way?

Mass com class article critique LaraLegath
I felt that is article was vague and did not do the best job informing me of the topic at hand. At some parts I still feel lost at exactly what production assistants do because they article didn't go into further detail and used very few sources or cited evidence to back up most of the claims the article makes. For instants the broad statement "Production assistants on films are sometimes attached to individual actors or filmmakers." is never collaborated on or goes further into depth about why this is the case. This can also be seen when listing the different kinds of Production assistants are listed and only a few of them are explained. To make this article stronger over all more citations would have to be used, the jobs needs to be explained better by using sources. This which would not only give the reader a better idea of the job but also give them sources to guide them in the right direction when researching the topic. LaraLegath (talk) 00:03, 18 September 2017 (UTC)


 * Hi : Thanks for the article critique.  If you decide to work on this article for the project, see if you can find sources - books and peer-reviewed journal articles from the library -  that go deeper into what production assistants do and make sure to cite the work that you do with these sources.  Please use the Wikipedia Editing Brochure, handed out in class, and the Citing Your Sources and Avoiding Plagiarism handouts linked from Modules in our Canvas course, as your go-to guides throughout the semester.  Anytime you need help with your article or have any questions, you can click on the Help tab from our Wikipedia course to view topics in the help forum and also contact our the Wikipedia expert assigned to our course Shalor.  Please let me know if you have any questions or need any help! Prof.bgreg (talk) 02:51, 25 September 2017 (UTC)

Bibliography for Mass Comm Article Project LaraLegath
I plan to add a whole new section for Production assistants who work in publication. Good and reliable sources have been harder to find so this is a work in progress.

1. Thomas-Medwid, Rachel S. "Lauren Foster." Bulletin of the American Meteorological Society, vol. 89, no. 10, Oct. 2008, pp. 1592-1593. EBSCOhost

2. Yager, Fred, and Jan Yager. Career Opportunities in the Film Industry. Checkmark Books, 2009.

3. Tonner-Connolly with Alicia van Couvering, Brandon. “The Seven Arts of Working in Film: A Necessary Guide to On-Set Protocol.” Filmmaker Magazine, 14 Apr. 2015, filmmakermagazine.com/92534-the-seven-arts-of-working-in-film/#.Wf-Qx2hSw2x.

4. Hamedy, Saba. “Climbing the Hollywood Ladder, One Coffee or Script Delivery at a Time.” Los Angeles Times, 23 May 2014, www.latimes.com/entertainment/envelope/cotown/la-et-ct-hollywood-production-assistants-20140525-story.html

LaraLegath (talk) 15:48, 5 October 2017 (UTC)

Article Draft for Mass Com course LaraLegath
please review and give feedback. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LaraLegath/sandbox

LaraLegath (talk) 15:47, 5 October 2017 (UTC)

Article Critique for Mass Comm
Many facts listed on the “Production Assistant” Wikipedia page are not referenced with a clear citation and there were few references on it. It is a neutral page but not all quotes may be entirely truthful since there are few citations. There is extreme bias on the portion about “Set PAs” since it claims they are usually the first ones in and the last ones out, as if they are the most hardworking job within the production of a film. That quote may be skewed to shine a positive light on the position. Most information in the “Production Assistant” link seem neutral but the page does not provide many citations and bias is noted among a few sentences when implied. After reading the page, it looks like viewpoints are over-represented to provide an abundance of information. For example, many Production Assistants from Canada are described, but not ones within the United States. The two listed references do not work, as the first one is not descriptive and the second one is outdated, not even willing to open. I think much of the information is current, but the article could talk more about a PA’s salary, a PA’s part in the finalized version of a film/tv show, and what the differences are in PAs internationally. --David.schoen (talk) 19:59, 15 September 2017 (UTC)


 * : This is a good article critique. As you begin to work on the article, should you choose to focus on it for your course project, you may want to work on some of the sections that have bias and look for legitimate sources, such as books from our library and peer-reviewed articles, that delve in the topic.  You may also want to consider ways to expand the article, such as examining the topic from an international perspective (for example: the role of PAs in film industries in other countries).  Please use the Wikipedia Editing Brochure, handed out in class, and the Citing Your Sources and Avoiding Plagiarism handouts linked from Modules in our Canvas course, as your go-to guides throughout the semester.  Anytime you need help with your article or have any questions, you can click on the Help tab from our Wikipedia course to view topics in the help forum and also contact our the Wikipedia expert assigned to our course Shalor.  Please let me know if you have any questions or need any help! Prof.bgreg (talk) 02:38, 25 September 2017 (UTC)

Bibliography Ideas for Mass Comm Article Project (9/25)
IDEAS FOR MY TOPIC WITH SOURCES:

Contribution plans:

Regarding the Production Assistant (PA) article on Wikipedia, one of the most important things I can add on the page are reliable sources. Since there are little sources within the entire web article, I’d like to back up many claims listed on the page. I can also add more information on the difference between a PA in America and a PA in Canada. The article is very Canadian-based, and there is hardly any information on American PAs. Additionally, I’d like to include some references to PAs in other international countries with a major film industry. Countries in Europe and South America have vast filmmaking industries, and the article does not mention PAs around the world. The article is not specific enough because it mentions Canadian PAs and only alludes to American PAs. Lastly, I’d like to add as little bias as possible when entering this data into the web article because there seems to be small hints of prejudice in the Wikipedia page.

Bibliography:

1) Clark, Caleb - The Production Assistant’s Pocket Handbook: Because Nobody Has Time to Tell You What You Need to Know [Inkslinger Press, 3rd edition, 2008]. Article.

2) Cram, Christopher - Digital Cinema: the Role of the Visual Effects Supervisor [Indiana University Press, 1st edition, 2012]. Article.

3) Griesinger, Justin - "Movie Crew Job Titles" [Film In Colorado, 1st edition, 2017]. Article.

4) Hamedy, Saba - "Climbing the Hollywood ladder, one coffee or script delivery at a time" [Los Angeles Times, 2014]. Web Article.

5) Kroon, Richard W. - A/V A to Z: An Encyclopedic Dictionary of Media, Entertainment and Other Audiovisual Terms [McFarland, 1st edition, 2014]. Textbook.

6) Robb, David - "Commentary: Production assistants need pay" [Hollywood Reporter, 2010]. Web Article.

David.schoen (talk) 18:40, 25 September 2017 (UTC)


 * Hi : This is a good plan for adding to the article.  I like how you plan to make it more balanced with an examination of PAs from a U.S. perspective.  Nice list of sources here. Best,Prof.bgreg (talk) 09:32, 15 October 2017 (UTC)

Article Draft for Mass Comm course - please review and give feedback (Sandbox Draft and Link - Homework for 10/9)
Hello, readers. I am currently working on a new section for the "Production Assistant" page on Wikipedia.

The section is centered around the tasks that PAs are typically asked to complete.

In the section, I plan to compare and contrast the tasks between a union and non-union PA.

I also plan to describe these tasks with reliable evidence to support the claims and eliminate any bias in the section.

Feel free to give constructive criticism or any other kind of feedback to improve the proposed section. Thanks!

Here is the link to the new "Task" section that I am drafting for the Production Assistant Wikipedia page (located under the tab labeled "Mass Comm Course - Sandbox Draft and Link" at the bottom of the page):

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:David.schoen/sandbox

David.schoen (talk) 18:17, 2 October 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review Link David.schoen
This is my peer review of LaraLegath's "PA" article draft:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LaraLegath/sandbox

David.schoen (talk) 15:23, 20 October 2017 (UTC)

Addition of the Publication Subheading LaraLegath
I have added a section about the role of PAs in the publication businesses. The article was heavily focused on production assistants in film, when really PAs can be found in any field that creates media or produces content. My addition now adds a new view of the types for PAs there are and explains the new variety of roles that PA's handle on the job. LaraLegath (talk) 03:30, 28 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Hi LaraLegath! This looks good so far - my only notes would be to work on the section's flow and to add more sourcing, if possible. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:11, 28 November 2017 (UTC)