Talk:Promoting Women in Entrepreneurship Act

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 20 September 2018 and 21 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Cstaebs. Peer reviewers: SamiAltman, Knmiller1997.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:45, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Sami's Peer Review
A lot to work on! Introduction seems very comprehensive. Depending on how you organize your article, and what goes into it, i think it can be shortened and condensed to get more of the main ideas. Seems neutral as well. (SamiAltman (talk) 05:12, 9 November 2018 (UTC))

Kendall's Peer Review
I like what you have so far. I also like that you incorporated the table on the right of the page to briefly summarize the main points of the act. This made it easier to read and understand. I definitely feel as if you have a little more to add to your article. You could begin to incorporate repercussions of the act and how it has effected women to date. Your description and introduction are well written and informative. You have also properly cited your sources and they look reliable. Good job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Knmiller1997 (talk • contribs) 00:47, 7 December 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review Response
The article is in need of some substance to reach a suitable length, but the amount of information on this act is limited to say the least. There is almost no articles or information regarding how the act has led to improvements in the number of women in STEM fields. If i am unable to find any info on the subject matter, i will have to incorporate this lack of evidence regarding the act's success into the wiki page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cstaebs (talk • contribs) 06:34, 11 December 2018 (UTC)