Talk:Radhika Parameswaran

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Molly's Critiques:

1. First, you shouldn’t need the reference section since all the references are listed at the end. Also, I noticed that you added awards into the “other contributions” section, and I would recommend making awards its own category. Other than that all of the parts were there and the sections all seemed strong. 2. I think the hook could be a stronger, but I also think it does a good job of saying exactly who the person is and what the rest of the article will be about. 3. I didn’t find any spelling errors, and I think all the sentences were clear and the style was good. However, if you add headings, it will automatically save your article in wiki format. 4. Overall I thought the article was really strong and hit on all the main points needed in the article.

Leah's Critique: For your wiki paper, I would recommend labeling your sections based off of the outline that Ann gave us. I would also move the information that you put in the intro to the scholarly work section.

I noticed in your references that you have three sources that you used in your wiki page cited, but you used 6 sources all together throughout your writing. I would make sure to cite those other three sources.

I’m confused with your section labeled “selected publication”, because I’m not sure if that’s your bibliography or just further readings. The bibliography are the 10 or more sources and publications that establish your scholars notoriety. The further reading section is for other publications that your scholar has done that are the most popular and that typically relate to her areas of study. I would make sure to clearly separate these to heading, and possibly add some more sources.

All together though it’s really good! Especially your background, scholarly work, and other contribution sections. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Leahrempfert (talk • contribs) 20:26, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

Good suggestions, folks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aburnett412 (talk • contribs) 01:59, 26 April 2017 (UTC)

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