Talk:Renata Carvalho/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 00:49, 23 March 2024 (UTC)

This is a quickfail. Unfortunately, it's just not long enough to be a Good Article at about 450 words.

Some specific feedback:


 * "Vastly positive" reviews is too much to say in wikivoice. Maybe a bit more about that work (as she wrote it) and some quotes of reception?
 * I recommend reading WP:CINS to fix some minor comma issues.
 * Adding more critical reception of her work would help with the length issue. It'd also prevent a WP:PROSELINE from forming.