Talk:Robert Hertzberg

Neutrality
This article does not seem to me entirely in keeping with Wikipedia's neutrality guidelines; specifically, it seems biased in favour of Hertzberg. The article contains a great deal of praise for him, proudly listing his accomlishments and priorities as a legislator, but doesn't seem to contain a word of criticism or negative comment about him. Perhaps there simply hasn't been any, but that seems unlikely... any politician who's had as long a career as he has must have attracted criticism from somebody. It should be added to the article, and some of the more hagiographic sections toned down or removed. Terraxos (talk) 04:07, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

Intro too long
In addition to the previous, the introduction to this article is WAY too long. It's almost as if somebody couldn't wait to get all this information into the article, and had to front-load it. Balance, folks, balance; introduction, development of text, and sidelights. --Piledhigheranddeeper (talk) 19:15, 14 January 2010 (UTC)

User removing referenced content without comment.
2602:306:cd48:e90:f472:3b13:a4fb:deac (talk)‎ has been removing referenced material without comment and causing problems with named references. I plan to revert the article to its 11 October 2013 version as the easiest way to take care of this. New material should be added back in using Wikipedia references:, not numbers like [54]. Be sure to include an edit summary. StarryGrandma (talk) 20:48, 15 October 2013 (UTC)

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