Talk:Robert Young Pelton

Need copy editing
Numerous spelling and link typos exist. I just added a 'c' for a .com. Additionally, various link boundaries over run into other words making inactive or poor links. I believe that Robert has admitted that he lives in Redondo Beach not merely LA. 143.232.210.38 (talk) 21:09, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

Autobiography
This article reads like an autobiography. 66.27.74.90 seems to be a sock-puppet of Robert Young Pelton. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 88.127.229.107 (talk) 12:49, 22 January 2013 (UTC)

Written like an advertisement
This article has major problems. In wording and content it gives the impression that Messiah is back on Earth. I do like RYP myself, but having read the article I feel like I've just been spoon-fed a kilo of white sugar. Armigo (talk) 14:51, 31 January 2013 (UTC)

Massive link rot
Almost every link in the body of the article, at least, leads to a 404. Khallus Maximus (talk) 17:46, 28 March 2015 (UTC)