Talk:Ronald J. Daniels

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https://www.washingtonpost.com/opinions/colleges-must-train-students-for-jobs--and-also-as-citizens/2019/12/29/b8724756-204e-11ea-a153-dce4b94e4249_story.html

https://www.theatlantic.com/ideas/archive/2020/01/why-we-ended-legacy-admissions-johns-hopkins/605131/

https://president.jhu.edu/meet-president-daniels/bio/

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https://www.fulbright.ca/about-us/board-of-directors/current-board-members/ronald-j-daniels-bio.html

https://jewishtimes.com/59254/hopkins-president-wife-establish-fund-for-first-generation-college-students/news/

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https://www.bloomberg.com/profile/person/1772670

https://thedailyrecord.com/2019/03/29/ronald-j-daniels/Reneeliiu (talk) 01:34, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

Proposed changes to Ronald J. Daniels Wikipedia entry
Good afternoon.

My name is Lauren Custer and I am the Director of Digital Strategy at Johns Hopkins University, working in the central Office of Communications. My office reports to the Office of the President.

We would like to request these proposed changes to our president's Wikipedia entry as much of it is out-of-date and we have gathered better references and sources for more relevant information. I hope that everything is formatted correctly. Thank you for your consideration and I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Best, Lauren Custer

Some proposed changes

 * Information to be added to first sentence, paragraph No. 2: He received the Carnegie Corporation’s Academic Leadership Award in 2015
 * Explanation of issue: additional biographical information
 * References supporting change: “Hopkins President Daniels receives Carnegie Corp. Academic Leadership Award,” Baltimore Business Journal, September 24, 2105. https://www.bizjournals.com/baltimore/news/2015/09/24/hopkins-president-daniels-receives-carnegie-corp.html


 * Information to be added as last sentence, paragraph No. 2: The Board of Trustees has voted to extend Daniels’ appointment for an additional five years, through June 2024.
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change: “Johns Hopkins trustees extend Ronald J. Daniels' presidency by five years,” The Hub, July 7, 2016, https://hub.jhu.edu/2016/07/07/president-daniels-contract-extended-trustees/


 * Information to be added and edited, paragraph No. 4 : Daniels has focused his leadership on several key areas: strengthening interdisciplinary collaboration in research and education, enhancing student access, deepening engagement with the city of Baltimore and supporting economic and social innovation. These priorities are embedded in the Ten by Twenty, the university’s first comprehensive strategic planning effort and were reflected in the $6 billion Rising to the Challenge campaign, which concluded in October 2018.
 * Explanation of issue: mischaracterization of priorities
 * References supporting change:
 * “Ten By Twenty: A Vision for Johns Hopkins by 2010,” https://president.jhu.edu/10x2020/
 * “Johns Hopkins concludes its 'Rising to the Challenge' capital campaign,” The Hub, October 12, 2018. https://hub.jhu.edu/2018/10/12/rising-to-the-challenge-campaign-closing/


 * Information to be removed and updated, first sentence in paragraph No. 5: His commitment to interdisciplinary collaboration has produced a series of transformative initiatives that seek to address some of society’s greatest challenges, from realizing the promise of precision medicine to responding to the needs of urban centers,
 * Explanation of issue: Mischaracterization of priorities and focus
 * References supporting change: “Cameo: Ron Daniels,” Baltimore Magazine, September 2016. https://www.baltimoremagazine.com/section/community/cameo-ron-daniels-president-johns-hopkins-university


 * Information to be added as new replacement for paragraph No. 6: Daniels also led the creation of several other ambitious, multidisciplinary initiatives, spanning divisions and institutions, including the Stavros Niarchos Foundation Agora Institute, which aims to strengthen civic engagement and encourage robust dialogue among all citizens; the Henry A. Kissinger Center for Global Affairs; the Malone Center for Engineering in Healthcare; the William H. Miller Department of Philosophy; the SNF Parkway Theatre; and the Bloomberg American Health Initiative.
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “Johns Hopkins University wants to improve civic discourse. It hopes a new institute can help.” Washington Post, June 27, 2017, https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/grade-point/wp/2017/06/27/johns-hopkins-university-wants-to-improve-civic-discourse-it-hopes-a-new-institute-can-help/?utm_term=.2bdf3823deb2.
 * “Bloomberg Gives Lead Gift for Johns Hopkins Kissinger Institute,” Philanthropy News Digest, April 13, 2015, https://philanthropynewsdigest.org/news/bloomberg-gives-lead-gift-for-johns-hopkins-kissinger-institute.
 * “New interdisciplinary center at Johns Hopkins aims to reshape medical care,” The Hub, February 4, 2016, https://hub.jhu.edu/2016/02/04/engineering-health-care-malone-center/.
 * “Investor's $75M gift to Johns Hopkins said to be largest ever to a philosophy department,” USA Today, January 17, 2018, https://www.usatoday.com/story/money/2018/01/17/legendary-investor-bill-miller-donation-johns-hopkins-university-philosophy/1040467001/
 * “Donors, civic leaders get sneak peek at renovated Parkway Theatre,” Baltimore Sun, April 20, 2017, https://www.baltimoresun.com/entertainment/bal-donors-civic-leaders-get-sneak-peek-at-renovated-parkway-theatre-20170420-story.html
 * “Gifts Roundup: Johns Hopkins Gets $300 Million for Public-Health Projects,” The Chronicle of Philanthropy, September 19, 2016, https://www.philanthropy.com/article/Gifts-Roundup-300-Million/237826


 * Information to be added as new replacement for paragraph No. 7: Reflecting his commitment to reducing barriers to participation in higher education for high achieving students from diverse socio-economic backgrounds, Daniels committed the university at his inauguration to expanding access and enhancing its financial aid program in order to become need blind. In November 2018, the university was able to achieve this long-held goal, thanks to a record $1.8 billion gift from Michael Bloomberg, allowing Johns Hopkins University to become permanently need-blind and to eliminate student loans from financial aid packages for all current and future undergraduates.
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “Installation Address of President Ron Daniels,” Office of the President, Johns Hopkins University, September 8, 2009, https://president.jhu.edu/meet-president-daniels/speeches-articles-and-media/installation-address-of-president-ron-daniels/
 * “Bloomberg Gives $1.8 Billion to Johns Hopkins for Student Aid,” New York Times, November 18, 2018, https://www.nytimes.com/2018/11/18/us/michael-bloomberg-johns-hopkins-donation.html


 * Information to be added as new replacement for paragraph No. 8: Daniels also has strengthened the quality of graduate education at Johns Hopkins, ushering in a series of reforms to PhD education including the creation of a PhD innovation fund, systematic collection and public dissemination of data on PhD program performance, and the creation of the first universitywide board charged with evaluating and supporting PhD education.
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “Initiative encourages new ideas for doctoral education,” The Hub, October 31, 2012, https://hub.jhu.edu/2012/10/31/phd-innovation-initiative/
 * “Johns Hopkins unveils data, resources for doctoral students,” The Hub, September 12, 2018, https://hub.jhu.edu/2018/09/12/doctoral-student-data-resource/


 * Information to be added as new replacement/update to existing paragraph No. 8, proposed new paragraph No. 9 re: strengthening ties to Baltimore: Daniels has been widely recognized for strengthening Johns Hopkins' ties to Baltimore. He has ushered in multiple initiatives in support of the city and its residents, including investment in an 88-acre revitalization plan near Johns Hopkins campus in East Baltimore; construction and operation of the Henderson-Hopkins School as the first new school built in East Baltimore in more than 20 years; the Homewood Community Partners Initiative, a $10 million commitment that has leveraged more than $200 million in investments from others to strengthen the physical, social, and economic well-being of 10 neighborhoods around the Homewood campus; and HopkinsLocal, a major economic inclusion effort to expand business and workforce opportunities in Baltimore. Under this latter program, more than 300 citizens from the most distressed neighborhoods in the city have been recruited into entry-level jobs, and Johns Hopkins has continued to be a national leader in the hiring of ex-offenders
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “EBDI redevelopment breaks ground for 34 more townhomes near Hopkins Hospital,” Baltimore Business Journal, June 13, 2018, https://www.bizjournals.com/baltimore/news/2018/06/13/ebdi-redevelopment-breaks-ground-for-34-more.html
 * “Gentrify or die? Inside a university's controversial plan for Baltimore,” The Guardian, April 18, 2018, https://www.theguardian.com/cities/2018/apr/18/gentrify-or-die-inside-a-universitys-controversial-plan-for-baltimore
 * “Spruce Up grants from Johns Hopkins aid neighborhoods one park or mural at a time,” Baltimore Sun, July 16, 2018, https://www.baltimoresun.com/news/maryland/baltimore-city/bs-bz-spruce-up-grants-20180619-story.html
 * “Next steps for HopkinsLocal,” Baltimore Sun, March 14, 2017, https://www.baltimoresun.com/news/opinion/editorial/bs-ed-hopkins-local-20170314-story.html


 * Information to be deleted, current paragraph No. 10, “Daniels serves as the chair of the executive committee of Johns Hopkins Medicine – the entity linking the Johns Hopkins Health System and the university’s School of Medicine. Daniels has worked closely with health system leadership through several strategic acquisitions and partnerships across health-related industry sectors. The Board of Trustees has voted to extend Daniels’ appointment for an additional five years, through June 2024.”
 * Explanation of issue: Some incorrect or repetitive information


 * Information to be added, new paragraph No. 10: Throughout his tenure, Daniels has championed a universitywide vision for innovation, bolstering efforts to unleash entrepreneurial instincts, translate discoveries into novel technologies, and foster enterprises that are developed, remain, and grow in Baltimore. The university’s ecosystem now facilitates start-up activity through four innovation hubs offering more than 37,000 square feet of incubation space near its main Baltimore campuses—including a dedicated student facility and makerspace, a Social Innovation Lab supporting mission-driven organizations with disruptive technologies from Johns Hopkins and across Baltimore, and a suite of supports for faculty inventions and affiliated companies.
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “Johns Hopkins Tech Ventures touts startup funding, increase in patents,” Baltimore Business Journal, September 22, 2017. https://www.bizjournals.com/baltimore/news/2017/09/22/johns-hopkins-tech-ventures-touts-startupfunding.html
 * “Johns Hopkins' new Remington space ready to welcome students, entrepreneurs ,” Baltimore Business Journal, August 31, 2018, https://www.bizjournals.com/baltimore/news/2018/08/31/johns-hopkins-new-remington-space-ready-to-welcome.html OR “Inside Johns Hopkins’ new Remington innovation hub,” Technically Baltimore, September 24, 2018, https://technical.ly/baltimore/2018/09/24/inside-johns-hopkins-new-remington-innovation-hub/
 * “How To Spark Entrepreneurship: Lessons From Innovation Hubs,” Forbes, January 21, 2019, https://www.forbes.com/sites/chakabooker/2019/01/21/how-to-spark-entrepreneurship-lessons-from-innovation-hubs/#6479eb161cab


 * Information to be added, new paragraph No. 11: A law and economics scholar, Daniels is the author or co-author of seven books and dozens of scholarly articles on the intersections of law, economics, development, and public policy in areas such as corporate and securities law, social and economic regulation, and the role of law and legal institutions in promoting third-world development. His recent writing has focused on the constraints facing young investigators in American life-science research, the opportunities for anchor institutions to support local economic growth, the significance of the humanities in education and society, the governance of public and private universities, and the role of the research university in liberal democracy. He chaired a Congressionally-mandated National Academies of Sciences commission whose 2018 final report addressed the challenges confronting post-doctoral students and young faculty members in the life sciences. He also spearheaded the establishment of the Coalition for Next Generation Life Science, a consortium of more than 20 universities and research institutions committed to collecting and publicly disseminating data on the education, training, and placement of students and postdoctoral researchers in the life sciences.
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * Ronald J. Daniels, C.V., https://president.jhu.edu/assets/uploads/sites/7/2016/09/Daniels.CV_.091216.pdf
 * “Supporting the Next Generation of Biomedical Researchers,” Ron Daniels, JAMA Network, July 3, 2018, https://jamanetwork.com/journals/jama/fullarticle/2685509
 * “A commitment to ‘BLocal’ in Baltimore,” Calvin Butler, Ronald Daniels, Ron Peterson, Baltimore Sun, April 7, 2016, https://www.baltimoresun.com/news/opinion/oped/bs-ed-blocal-20160407-story.html
 * “Please, students, take that ‘impractical’ humanities course. We will all benefit.,” Ronald J. Daniels, The Washington Post, September 14, 2018, https://www.washingtonpost.com/opinions/please-students-take-that-impractical-humanities-course-we-will-all-benefit/2018/09/14/f50b4f3e-b761-11e8-a2c5-3187f427e253_story.html?utm_term=.9baa38af464b
 * “To Save State Universities, Free Them From the States,” Ronald J. Daniels BloombergView, April 11, 2016, https://www.bloomberg.com/opinion/articles/2016-04-11/to-save-state-universities-free-them-from-the-states
 * “Next Generation Researchers Initiative,” The National Academies of Sciences, Engineering, and Medicine, http://sites.nationalacademies.org/pga/bhew/nextgeneration/index.htm
 * “A new data effort to inform career choices in biomedicine,” Rebecca Blank, Ronald J. Daniels, Gary Gilliland, Amy Gutmann, Samuel Hawgood, Freeman A. Hrabowski, Martha E. Pollack, Vincent Price, L. Rafael Reif, Mark S. Schlissel, Science, December 15, 2017, http://science.sciencemag.org/content/358/6369/1388


 * Information to be added to Selected Works:
 * Please, students, take that ‘impractical’ humanities course. We will all benefit. Ronald J. Daniels (The Washington Post, September 14, 2018)
 * Supporting the Next Generation of Biomedical Researchers, Ron Daniels (JAMA Network, July 3, 2018.)
 * Knee-Capping Excellence, Ronald J. Daniels (Issues in Science and Technology, Winter 2018).
 * A new data effort to inform career choices in biomedicine, Rebecca Blank, Ronald J. Daniels, Gary Gilliland, Amy Gutmann, Samuel Hawgood, Freeman A. Hrabowski, Martha E. Pollack, Vincent Price, L. Rafael Reif, Mark S. Schlissel, Science, December 15, 2017
 * President Daniels in The Globe and Mail: ‘Keep surgically focused on your highest priorities’ – November 6, 2017
 * A Better Way to Help U.S. Victims of Free Trade, Ronald J. Daniels and Michael Trebilcock (BloombergView, December 2, 2016)
 * Allowing guns on campus will invite tragedies, not end them, Daniel Webster and Ronald Daniels (Washington Post, October 21, 2016).
 * STEM education key to the city’s future, Ronald Daniels and Stanley Litow (Baltimore Business Journal, June 23, 2016).
 * Free the Public Universities, Ronald J. Daniels (Chronicle of Higher Education, May 5, 2016).
 * To Save State Universities, Free Them From the States, Ronald J. Daniels (BloombergView, April 11, 2016).
 * A commitment to ‘BLocal’ in Baltimore, Calvin Butler, Ronald Daniels, Ron Peterson (Baltimore Sun, April 7, 2016).
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information


 * Information to be removed from References:
 * 1) ^ “Daniels assumes JHU helm”. Gazette.jhu.edu. 2009-03-02. Retrieved 2019-01-03.
 * 2) ^ "Ronald J. Daniels Named Provost At The University Of Pennsylvania | Penn News". Upenn.edu. 2005-04-25. Retrieved 2018-01-03.
 * 3) ^ "Order of Canada's newest appointees include Paralympian, Supreme Court judge and astrophysicist". CBC News, December 30, 2016.
 * 4) ^ https://www.amphilsoc.org/blog/election-new-members-2018-spring-meeting
 * 5) ^ "Ronald J. Daniels CV".
 * Explanation of issue: deleted items with dead links


 * Information to be added or updated in External Links:
 * Gentrify or die? Inside a university’s controversial plan for Baltimore (The Guardian, April 18, 2018).
 * From the New York Times: A Wall Street Giant Makes a $75 Million Bet on Academic Philosophy – January 16, 2018
 * The Washington Post talks with President Daniels about the new Stavros Niarchos Foundation Agora Institute – June 27, 2017
 * From the Washington Post: Hopkins hires hundreds in Baltimore, seeking to strengthen community – March 9, 2017
 * ‘Times Higher Education’ looks at the university as pillar of the community – February 9, 2017
 * ‘The Economist’ looks at the challenging history and strengthening future of Hopkins and Baltimore – September 2, 2016
 * Aspen Ideas Festival – July 2, 2016
 * Milken Institute Global Conference – May 3, 2016
 * Daniels speaks about HopkinsLocal on Dan Rodricks’ Roughly Speaking podcast – November 10, 2015
 * In MSNBC appearance, Daniels discusses Johns Hopkins’ efforts to strengthen Baltimore – November 6, 2015
 * Announcement of election
 * President Daniels' 10 by 20 Plan Through 2020 and the latest progress report.
 * Appearances on C-SPAN


 * Explanation of issue: Updated broken links and added new items

Lmcuster (talk) 18:06, 24 January 2019 (UTC)

Reply 24-JAN-2019
Regards,  Spintendo   18:41, 24 January 2019 (UTC)
 * The required disclosures have not been made.

Proposed changes to Ronald J. Daniels Wikipedia entry
Good afternoon.

My name is Lauren Custer and I am the Director of Digital Strategy at Johns Hopkins University, working in the central Office of Communications. My office reports to the Office of the President.

We would like to request these proposed changes to our president's Wikipedia entry as much of it is out-of-date and we have gathered better references and sources for more relevant information. I hope that everything is formatted correctly. Thank you for your consideration and I'm looking forward to hearing from you.


 * Information to be added to first sentence, paragraph No. 2: He received the Carnegie Corporation’s Academic Leadership Award in 2015
 * Explanation of issue: additional biographical information
 * References supporting change: “Hopkins President Daniels receives Carnegie Corp. Academic Leadership Award,” Baltimore Business Journal, September 24, 2105. https://www.bizjournals.com/baltimore/news/2015/09/24/hopkins-president-daniels-receives-carnegie-corp.html


 * Information to be added as last sentence, paragraph No. 2: The Board of Trustees has voted to extend Daniels’ appointment for an additional five years, through June 2024.
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change: “Johns Hopkins trustees extend Ronald J. Daniels' presidency by five years,” The Hub, July 7, 2016, https://hub.jhu.edu/2016/07/07/president-daniels-contract-extended-trustees/


 * Information to be added and edited, paragraph No. 4 : Daniels has focused his leadership on several key areas: strengthening interdisciplinary collaboration in research and education, enhancing student access, deepening engagement with the city of Baltimore and supporting economic and social innovation. These priorities are embedded in the Ten by Twenty, the university’s first comprehensive strategic planning effort and were reflected in the $6 billion Rising to the Challenge campaign, which concluded in October 2018.
 * Explanation of issue: mischaracterization of priorities
 * References supporting change:
 * “Ten By Twenty: A Vision for Johns Hopkins by 2010,” https://president.jhu.edu/10x2020/
 * “Johns Hopkins concludes its 'Rising to the Challenge' capital campaign,” The Hub, October 12, 2018. https://hub.jhu.edu/2018/10/12/rising-to-the-challenge-campaign-closing/


 * Information to be removed and updated, first sentence in paragraph No. 5: His commitment to interdisciplinary collaboration has produced a series of transformative initiatives that seek to address some of society’s greatest challenges, from realizing the promise of precision medicine to responding to the needs of urban centers,
 * Explanation of issue: Mischaracterization of priorities and focus
 * References supporting change: “Cameo: Ron Daniels,” Baltimore Magazine, September 2016. https://www.baltimoremagazine.com/section/community/cameo-ron-daniels-president-johns-hopkins-university


 * Information to be added as new replacement for paragraph No. 6: Daniels also led the creation of several other ambitious, multidisciplinary initiatives, spanning divisions and institutions, including the Stavros Niarchos Foundation Agora Institute, which aims to strengthen civic engagement and encourage robust dialogue among all citizens; the Henry A. Kissinger Center for Global Affairs; the Malone Center for Engineering in Healthcare; the William H. Miller Department of Philosophy; the SNF Parkway Theatre; and the Bloomberg American Health Initiative.
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “Johns Hopkins University wants to improve civic discourse. It hopes a new institute can help.” Washington Post, June 27, 2017, https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/grade-point/wp/2017/06/27/johns-hopkins-university-wants-to-improve-civic-discourse-it-hopes-a-new-institute-can-help/?utm_term=.2bdf3823deb2.
 * “Bloomberg Gives Lead Gift for Johns Hopkins Kissinger Institute,” Philanthropy News Digest, April 13, 2015, https://philanthropynewsdigest.org/news/bloomberg-gives-lead-gift-for-johns-hopkins-kissinger-institute.
 * “New interdisciplinary center at Johns Hopkins aims to reshape medical care,” The Hub, February 4, 2016, https://hub.jhu.edu/2016/02/04/engineering-health-care-malone-center/.
 * “Investor's $75M gift to Johns Hopkins said to be largest ever to a philosophy department,” USA Today, January 17, 2018, https://www.usatoday.com/story/money/2018/01/17/legendary-investor-bill-miller-donation-johns-hopkins-university-philosophy/1040467001/
 * “Donors, civic leaders get sneak peek at renovated Parkway Theatre,” Baltimore Sun, April 20, 2017, https://www.baltimoresun.com/entertainment/bal-donors-civic-leaders-get-sneak-peek-at-renovated-parkway-theatre-20170420-story.html
 * “Gifts Roundup: Johns Hopkins Gets $300 Million for Public-Health Projects,” The Chronicle of Philanthropy, September 19, 2016, https://www.philanthropy.com/article/Gifts-Roundup-300-Million/237826


 * Information to be added as new replacement for paragraph No. 7: Reflecting his commitment to reducing barriers to participation in higher education for high achieving students from diverse socio-economic backgrounds, Daniels committed the university at his inauguration to expanding access and enhancing its financial aid program in order to become need blind. In November 2018, the university was able to achieve this long-held goal, thanks to a record $1.8 billion gift from Michael Bloomberg, allowing Johns Hopkins University to become permanently need-blind and to eliminate student loans from financial aid packages for all current and future undergraduates.
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “Installation Address of President Ron Daniels,” Office of the President, Johns Hopkins University, September 8, 2009, https://president.jhu.edu/meet-president-daniels/speeches-articles-and-media/installation-address-of-president-ron-daniels/
 * “Bloomberg Gives $1.8 Billion to Johns Hopkins for Student Aid,” New York Times, November 18, 2018, https://www.nytimes.com/2018/11/18/us/michael-bloomberg-johns-hopkins-donation.html


 * Information to be added as new replacement for paragraph No. 8: Daniels also has strengthened the quality of graduate education at Johns Hopkins, ushering in a series of reforms to PhD education including the creation of a PhD innovation fund, systematic collection and public dissemination of data on PhD program performance, and the creation of the first universitywide board charged with evaluating and supporting PhD education.
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “Initiative encourages new ideas for doctoral education,” The Hub, October 31, 2012, https://hub.jhu.edu/2012/10/31/phd-innovation-initiative/
 * “Johns Hopkins unveils data, resources for doctoral students,” The Hub, September 12, 2018, https://hub.jhu.edu/2018/09/12/doctoral-student-data-resource/


 * Information to be added as new replacement/update to existing paragraph No. 8, proposed new paragraph No. 9 re: strengthening ties to Baltimore: Daniels has been widely recognized for strengthening Johns Hopkins' ties to Baltimore. He has ushered in multiple initiatives in support of the city and its residents, including investment in an 88-acre revitalization plan near Johns Hopkins campus in East Baltimore; construction and operation of the Henderson-Hopkins School as the first new school built in East Baltimore in more than 20 years; the Homewood Community Partners Initiative, a $10 million commitment that has leveraged more than $200 million in investments from others to strengthen the physical, social, and economic well-being of 10 neighborhoods around the Homewood campus; and HopkinsLocal, a major economic inclusion effort to expand business and workforce opportunities in Baltimore. Under this latter program, more than 300 citizens from the most distressed neighborhoods in the city have been recruited into entry-level jobs, and Johns Hopkins has continued to be a national leader in the hiring of ex-offenders
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “EBDI redevelopment breaks ground for 34 more townhomes near Hopkins Hospital,” Baltimore Business Journal, June 13, 2018, https://www.bizjournals.com/baltimore/news/2018/06/13/ebdi-redevelopment-breaks-ground-for-34-more.html
 * “Gentrify or die? Inside a university's controversial plan for Baltimore,” The Guardian, April 18, 2018, https://www.theguardian.com/cities/2018/apr/18/gentrify-or-die-inside-a-universitys-controversial-plan-for-baltimore
 * “Spruce Up grants from Johns Hopkins aid neighborhoods one park or mural at a time,” Baltimore Sun, July 16, 2018, https://www.baltimoresun.com/news/maryland/baltimore-city/bs-bz-spruce-up-grants-20180619-story.html
 * “Next steps for HopkinsLocal,” Baltimore Sun, March 14, 2017, https://www.baltimoresun.com/news/opinion/editorial/bs-ed-hopkins-local-20170314-story.html


 * Information to be deleted, current paragraph No. 10, “Daniels serves as the chair of the executive committee of Johns Hopkins Medicine – the entity linking the Johns Hopkins Health System and the university’s School of Medicine. Daniels has worked closely with health system leadership through several strategic acquisitions and partnerships across health-related industry sectors. The Board of Trustees has voted to extend Daniels’ appointment for an additional five years, through June 2024.”
 * Explanation of issue: Some incorrect or repetitive information


 * Information to be added, new paragraph No. 10: Throughout his tenure, Daniels has championed a universitywide vision for innovation, bolstering efforts to unleash entrepreneurial instincts, translate discoveries into novel technologies, and foster enterprises that are developed, remain, and grow in Baltimore. The university’s ecosystem now facilitates start-up activity through four innovation hubs offering more than 37,000 square feet of incubation space near its main Baltimore campuses—including a dedicated student facility and makerspace, a Social Innovation Lab supporting mission-driven organizations with disruptive technologies from Johns Hopkins and across Baltimore, and a suite of supports for faculty inventions and affiliated companies.
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “Johns Hopkins Tech Ventures touts startup funding, increase in patents,” Baltimore Business Journal, September 22, 2017. https://www.bizjournals.com/baltimore/news/2017/09/22/johns-hopkins-tech-ventures-touts-startupfunding.html
 * “Johns Hopkins' new Remington space ready to welcome students, entrepreneurs ,” Baltimore Business Journal, August 31, 2018, https://www.bizjournals.com/baltimore/news/2018/08/31/johns-hopkins-new-remington-space-ready-to-welcome.html OR “Inside Johns Hopkins’ new Remington innovation hub,” Technically Baltimore, September 24, 2018, https://technical.ly/baltimore/2018/09/24/inside-johns-hopkins-new-remington-innovation-hub/
 * “How To Spark Entrepreneurship: Lessons From Innovation Hubs,” Forbes, January 21, 2019, https://www.forbes.com/sites/chakabooker/2019/01/21/how-to-spark-entrepreneurship-lessons-from-innovation-hubs/#6479eb161cab


 * Information to be added, new paragraph No. 11: A law and economics scholar, Daniels is the author or co-author of seven books and dozens of scholarly articles on the intersections of law, economics, development, and public policy in areas such as corporate and securities law, social and economic regulation, and the role of law and legal institutions in promoting third-world development. His recent writing has focused on the constraints facing young investigators in American life-science research, the opportunities for anchor institutions to support local economic growth, the significance of the humanities in education and society, the governance of public and private universities, and the role of the research university in liberal democracy. He chaired a Congressionally-mandated National Academies of Sciences commission whose 2018 final report addressed the challenges confronting post-doctoral students and young faculty members in the life sciences. He also spearheaded the establishment of the Coalition for Next Generation Life Science, a consortium of more than 20 universities and research institutions committed to collecting and publicly disseminating data on the education, training, and placement of students and postdoctoral researchers in the life sciences.
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * Ronald J. Daniels, C.V., https://president.jhu.edu/assets/uploads/sites/7/2016/09/Daniels.CV_.091216.pdf
 * “Supporting the Next Generation of Biomedical Researchers,” Ron Daniels, JAMA Network, July 3, 2018, https://jamanetwork.com/journals/jama/fullarticle/2685509
 * “A commitment to ‘BLocal’ in Baltimore,” Calvin Butler, Ronald Daniels, Ron Peterson, Baltimore Sun, April 7, 2016, https://www.baltimoresun.com/news/opinion/oped/bs-ed-blocal-20160407-story.html
 * “Please, students, take that ‘impractical’ humanities course. We will all benefit.,” Ronald J. Daniels, The Washington Post, September 14, 2018, https://www.washingtonpost.com/opinions/please-students-take-that-impractical-humanities-course-we-will-all-benefit/2018/09/14/f50b4f3e-b761-11e8-a2c5-3187f427e253_story.html?utm_term=.9baa38af464b
 * “To Save State Universities, Free Them From the States,” Ronald J. Daniels BloombergView, April 11, 2016, https://www.bloomberg.com/opinion/articles/2016-04-11/to-save-state-universities-free-them-from-the-states
 * “Next Generation Researchers Initiative,” The National Academies of Sciences, Engineering, and Medicine, http://sites.nationalacademies.org/pga/bhew/nextgeneration/index.htm
 * “A new data effort to inform career choices in biomedicine,” Rebecca Blank, Ronald J. Daniels, Gary Gilliland, Amy Gutmann, Samuel Hawgood, Freeman A. Hrabowski, Martha E. Pollack, Vincent Price, L. Rafael Reif, Mark S. Schlissel, Science, December 15, 2017, http://science.sciencemag.org/content/358/6369/1388


 * Information to be added to Selected Works:
 * Please, students, take that ‘impractical’ humanities course. We will all benefit. Ronald J. Daniels (The Washington Post, September 14, 2018)
 * Supporting the Next Generation of Biomedical Researchers, Ron Daniels (JAMA Network, July 3, 2018.)
 * Knee-Capping Excellence, Ronald J. Daniels (Issues in Science and Technology, Winter 2018).
 * A new data effort to inform career choices in biomedicine, Rebecca Blank, Ronald J. Daniels, Gary Gilliland, Amy Gutmann, Samuel Hawgood, Freeman A. Hrabowski, Martha E. Pollack, Vincent Price, L. Rafael Reif, Mark S. Schlissel, Science, December 15, 2017
 * President Daniels in The Globe and Mail: ‘Keep surgically focused on your highest priorities’ – November 6, 2017
 * A Better Way to Help U.S. Victims of Free Trade, Ronald J. Daniels and Michael Trebilcock (BloombergView, December 2, 2016)
 * Allowing guns on campus will invite tragedies, not end them, Daniel Webster and Ronald Daniels (Washington Post, October 21, 2016).
 * STEM education key to the city’s future, Ronald Daniels and Stanley Litow (Baltimore Business Journal, June 23, 2016).
 * Free the Public Universities, Ronald J. Daniels (Chronicle of Higher Education, May 5, 2016).
 * To Save State Universities, Free Them From the States, Ronald J. Daniels (BloombergView, April 11, 2016).
 * A commitment to ‘BLocal’ in Baltimore, Calvin Butler, Ronald Daniels, Ron Peterson (Baltimore Sun, April 7, 2016).
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information


 * Information to be removed from References:
 * 1) ^ “Daniels assumes JHU helm”. Gazette.jhu.edu. 2009-03-02. Retrieved 2019-01-03.
 * 2) ^ "Ronald J. Daniels Named Provost At The University Of Pennsylvania | Penn News". Upenn.edu. 2005-04-25. Retrieved 2018-01-03.
 * 3) ^ "Order of Canada's newest appointees include Paralympian, Supreme Court judge and astrophysicist". CBC News, December 30, 2016.
 * 4) ^ https://www.amphilsoc.org/blog/election-new-members-2018-spring-meeting
 * 5) ^ "Ronald J. Daniels CV".
 * Explanation of issue: deleted items with dead links


 * Information to be added or updated in External Links:
 * Gentrify or die? Inside a university’s controversial plan for Baltimore (The Guardian, April 18, 2018).
 * From the New York Times: A Wall Street Giant Makes a $75 Million Bet on Academic Philosophy – January 16, 2018
 * The Washington Post talks with President Daniels about the new Stavros Niarchos Foundation Agora Institute – June 27, 2017
 * From the Washington Post: Hopkins hires hundreds in Baltimore, seeking to strengthen community – March 9, 2017
 * ‘Times Higher Education’ looks at the university as pillar of the community – February 9, 2017
 * ‘The Economist’ looks at the challenging history and strengthening future of Hopkins and Baltimore – September 2, 2016
 * Aspen Ideas Festival – July 2, 2016
 * Milken Institute Global Conference – May 3, 2016
 * Daniels speaks about HopkinsLocal on Dan Rodricks’ Roughly Speaking podcast – November 10, 2015
 * In MSNBC appearance, Daniels discusses Johns Hopkins’ efforts to strengthen Baltimore – November 6, 2015
 * Announcement of election
 * President Daniels' 10 by 20 Plan Through 2020 and the latest progress report.
 * Appearances on C-SPAN


 * Explanation of issue: Updated broken links and added new items

Lmcuster (talk) 20:01, 24 January 2019 (UTC)

Reply 26-JAN-2019
Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request.  Spintendo   06:14, 26 January 2019 (UTC)

Proposed changes to Ronald J. Daniels Wikipedia entry
Good afternoon. My name is Lauren Custer and I am the Director of Digital Strategy at Johns Hopkins University, working in the central Office of Communications. My office reports to the Office of the President. I would like to submit an updated list of proposed edits based on feedback we received on the last batch a couple of weeks ago. We understand why some of the edits were not approved and hope that these updates make sense. Thank you again for your consideration and taking the time to review our suggested changes!

In 2013, President Daniels shared the Ten by Twenty, Johns Hopkins’ first comprehensive strategic plan which would focus on strengthening interdisciplinary collaboration in research and education, enhancing student access, deepening engagement with the city of Baltimore, and supporting economic and social innovation. These commitments were highlighted in the $6 billion Rising to the Challenge capital campaign.
 * Information to be added and edited:
 * Explanation of issue: mischaracterization of priorities
 * References supporting change: “Ten By Twenty: A Vision for Johns Hopkins by 2010,” https://president.jhu.edu/10x2020/; and “Johns Hopkins concludes its 'Rising to the Challenge' capital campaign,” The Hub, October 12, 2018. https://hub.jhu.edu/2018/10/12/rising-to-the-challenge-campaign-closing/

During Daniels’ tenure, the university has undertaken a series of multidisciplinary initiatives that span its divisions and institutions, including the Stavros Niarchos Foundation Agora Institute, which aims to strengthen civic engagement and encourage robust dialogue among all citizens; the Henry A. Kissinger Center for Global Affairs; the Malone Center for Engineering in Healthcare; the William H. Miller Department of Philosophy; the SNF Parkway Theatre; and the Bloomberg American Health Initiative.
 * Information to be added as new paragraph:
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “Johns Hopkins University wants to improve civic discourse. It hopes a new institute can help.” Washington Post, June 27, 2017, https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/grade-point/wp/2017/06/27/johns-hopkins-university-wants-to-improve-civic-discourse-it-hopes-a-new-institute-can-help/.
 * “Bloomberg Gives Lead Gift for Johns Hopkins Kissinger Institute,” Philanthropy News Digest, April 13, 2015, https://philanthropynewsdigest.org/news/bloomberg-gives-lead-gift-for-johns-hopkins-kissinger-institute.
 * “New interdisciplinary center at Johns Hopkins aims to reshape medical care,” The Hub, February 4, 2016, https://hub.jhu.edu/2016/02/04/engineering-health-care-malone-center/.
 * “Investor's $75M gift to Johns Hopkins said to be largest ever to a philosophy department,” USA Today, January 17, 2018, https://www.usatoday.com/story/money/2018/01/17/legendary-investor-bill-miller-donation-johns-hopkins-university-philosophy/1040467001/
 * “Donors, civic leaders get sneak peek at renovated Parkway Theatre,” Baltimore Sun, April 20, 2017, https://www.baltimoresun.com/entertainment/bal-donors-civic-leaders-get-sneak-peek-at-renovated-parkway-theatre-20170420-story.html
 * “Gifts Roundup: Johns Hopkins Gets $300 Million for Public-Health Projects,” The Chronicle of Philanthropy, September 19, 2016, https://www.philanthropy.com/article/Gifts-Roundup-300-Million/237826

Reflecting his commitment to reducing barriers to participation in higher education for high achieving students from diverse socio-economic backgrounds, Daniels committed the university at his inauguration to expanding access and enhancing its financial aid program in order to become need blind. In November 2018, the university was able to achieve this long-held goal, thanks to a record $1.8 billion gift from Michael Bloomberg, allowing Johns Hopkins University to become permanently need-blind and to eliminate student loans from financial aid packages for all current and future undergraduates.
 * Information to be added as new paragraph:
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “Installation Address of President Ron Daniels,” Office of the President, Johns Hopkins University, September 8, 2009, https://president.jhu.edu/meet-president-daniels/speeches-articles-and-media/installation-address-of-president-ron-daniels/
 * “Bloomberg Gives $1.8 Billion to Johns Hopkins for Student Aid,” New York Times, November 18, 2018, https://www.nytimes.com/2018/11/18/us/michael-bloomberg-johns-hopkins-donation.html

Under Daniels’ leadership, the university has worked to strengthen the quality of its graduate education programs with a series of reforms to PhD education, including the creation of a PhD innovation fund to evaluate and improve doctoral education, systematic collection and public dissemination of data on PhD program performance, and the creation of the first universitywide board charged with evaluating and supporting PhD education.
 * Information to be added as new replacement for paragraph:
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “Initiative encourages new ideas for doctoral education,” The Hub, October 31, 2012, https://hub.jhu.edu/2012/10/31/phd-innovation-initiative/
 * “Johns Hopkins unveils data, resources for doctoral students,” The Hub, September 12, 2018, https://hub.jhu.edu/2018/09/12/doctoral-student-data-resource/

Daniels, who as president of Johns Hopkins University “has used his position to become an important civic leader in a city struggling with unemployment, race issues and poverty,” has ushered in multiple initiatives in support of the city and its residents, including investment in an 88-acre revitalization plan near Johns Hopkins campus in East Baltimore; construction and operation of the Henderson-Hopkins School as the first new school built in East Baltimore in more than 20 years; the Homewood Community Partners Initiative, a $10 million commitment that has leveraged more than $200 million in investments from others to strengthen the physical, social, and economic well-being of 10 neighborhoods around the Homewood campus; and HopkinsLocal, a major economic inclusion effort to expand business and workforce opportunities in Baltimore. Under this latter program, more than 300 citizens from the most distressed neighborhoods in the city have been recruited into entry-level jobs, and Johns Hopkins has continued to be a national leader in the hiring of ex-offenders.
 * Information to be added as new paragraph No. 9 re: strengthening ties to Baltimore:
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “Whether helping Baltimore or taking on Trump, Johns Hopkins president doesn't forget Canadian roots,” National Post, February 2, 2017.
 * “EBDI redevelopment breaks ground for 34 more townhomes near Hopkins Hospital,” Baltimore Business Journal, June 13, 2018, https://www.bizjournals.com/baltimore/news/2018/06/13/ebdi-redevelopment-breaks-ground-for-34-more.html
 * “Gentrify or die? Inside a university's controversial plan for Baltimore,” The Guardian, April 18, 2018, https://www.theguardian.com/cities/2018/apr/18/gentrify-or-die-inside-a-universitys-controversial-plan-for-baltimore
 * “Spruce Up grants from Johns Hopkins aid neighborhoods one park or mural at a time,” Baltimore Sun, July 16, 2018, https://www.baltimoresun.com/news/maryland/baltimore-city/bs-bz-spruce-up-grants-20180619-story.html
 * “Next steps for HopkinsLocal,” Baltimore Sun, March 14, 2017, https://www.baltimoresun.com/news/opinion/editorial/bs-ed-hopkins-local-20170314-story.html

Throughout his tenure, Daniels has spearheaded the creation of a number of entrepreneurial enhancements for the Johns Hopkins community, such as four innovation hubs, one of which is a makerspace for students and a Social Innovation Lab supporting mission-driven organizations from Johns Hopkins and across Baltimore.
 * Information to be added, new paragraph:
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information
 * References supporting change:
 * “Johns Hopkins Tech Ventures touts startup funding, increase in patents,” Baltimore Business Journal, September 22, 2017. https://www.bizjournals.com/baltimore/news/2017/09/22/johns-hopkins-tech-ventures-touts-startupfunding.html
 * “Johns Hopkins' new Remington space ready to welcome students, entrepreneurs ,” Baltimore Business Journal, August 31, 2018, https://www.bizjournals.com/baltimore/news/2018/08/31/johns-hopkins-new-remington-space-ready-to-welcome.html OR “Inside Johns Hopkins’ new Remington innovation hub,” Technically Baltimore, September 24, 2018, https://technical.ly/baltimore/2018/09/24/inside-johns-hopkins-new-remington-innovation-hub/
 * “How To Spark Entrepreneurship: Lessons From Innovation Hubs,” Forbes, January 21, 2019, https://www.forbes.com/sites/chakabooker/2019/01/21/how-to-spark-entrepreneurship-lessons-from-innovation-hubs/

Awards and Honors Daniels received the 2015 Carnegie Corporation of New York Academic Leadership Award. In December 2016 was named a Member of the Order of Canada.Ronald_J._Daniels He was elected to the American Philosophical Society in 2018.Ronald_J._Daniels
 * Information to be added, new section, Awards and Honors:
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update consistent with peers, new information, presenting information in a manner consistent with peers
 * Reference supporting change:
 * https://www.carnegie.org/news/articles/carnegie-corporation-new-york-honors-four-higher-education-visionaries-winners-2015-academic-leadership-award/


 * Information to be added to Selected Works:
 * Please, students, take that ‘impractical’ humanities course. We will all benefit. Ronald J. Daniels (The Washington Post, September 14, 2018)
 * Supporting the Next Generation of Biomedical Researchers, Ron Daniels (JAMA Network, July 3, 2018.)
 * Knee-Capping Excellence, Ronald J. Daniels (Issues in Science and Technology, Winter 2018).
 * A new data effort to inform career choices in biomedicine, Rebecca Blank, Ronald J. Daniels, Gary Gilliland, Amy Gutmann, Samuel Hawgood, Freeman A. Hrabowski, Martha E. Pollack, Vincent Price, L. Rafael Reif, Mark S. Schlissel, Science, December 15, 2017
 * President Daniels in The Globe and Mail: ‘Keep surgically focused on your highest priorities’ – November 6, 2017
 * A Better Way to Help U.S. Victims of Free Trade, Ronald J. Daniels and Michael Trebilcock (BloombergView, December 2, 2016)
 * Allowing guns on campus will invite tragedies, not end them, Daniel Webster and Ronald Daniels (Washington Post, October 21, 2016).
 * STEM education key to the city’s future, Ronald Daniels and Stanley Litow (Baltimore Business Journal, June 23, 2016).
 * Free the Public Universities, Ronald J. Daniels (Chronicle of Higher Education, May 5, 2016).
 * To Save State Universities, Free Them From the States, Ronald J. Daniels (BloombergView, April 11, 2016).
 * A commitment to ‘BLocal’ in Baltimore, Calvin Butler, Ronald Daniels, Ron Peterson (Baltimore Sun, April 7, 2016).
 * Explanation of issue: Recommended update, new information


 * Information to be removed from References:
 * 1) “Daniels assumes JHU helm”. Gazette.jhu.edu. 2009-03-02. Retrieved 2019-01-03.
 * 2) "Ronald J. Daniels Named Provost At The University Of Pennsylvania | Penn News". Upenn.edu. 2005-04-25. Retrieved 2018-01-03.
 * 3) "Order of Canada's newest appointees include Paralympian, Supreme Court judge and astrophysicist". CBC News, December 30, 2016.
 * 4) https://www.amphilsoc.org/blog/election-new-members-2018-spring-meeting
 * 5) "Ronald J. Daniels CV".
 * Explanation of issue: deleted items with dead links


 * Information to be added or updated in External Links:
 * 1) Gentrify or die? Inside a university’s controversial plan for Baltimore (The Guardian, April 18, 2018).
 * 2) From the New York Times: A Wall Street Giant Makes a $75 Million Bet on Academic Philosophy – January 16, 2018
 * 3) The Washington Post talks with President Daniels about the new Stavros Niarchos Foundation Agora Institute – June 27, 2017
 * 4) From the Washington Post: Hopkins hires hundreds in Baltimore, seeking to strengthen community – March 9, 2017
 * 5) ‘Times Higher Education’ looks at the university as pillar of the community – February 9, 2017
 * 6) ‘The Economist’ looks at the challenging history and strengthening future of Hopkins and Baltimore – September 2, 2016
 * 7) Aspen Ideas Festival – July 2, 2016
 * 8) Milken Institute Global Conference – May 3, 2016
 * 9) Daniels speaks about HopkinsLocal on Dan Rodricks’ Roughly Speaking podcast – November 10, 2015
 * 10) In MSNBC appearance, Daniels discusses Johns Hopkins’ efforts to strengthen Baltimore – November 6, 2015
 * 11) Announcement of election
 * 12) President Daniels' 10 by 20 Plan Through 2020 and the latest progress report.
 * 13) Appearances on C-SPAN
 * Explanation of issue: Updated broken links and added new items

Lmcuster (talk) 20:21, 13 February 2019 (UTC)
 * ❌ Lmcuster - a few minor things that will need to be amended (though I think this is getting closer):
 * All of your suggestions are in extreme violation of WP:EXT which proscribes the use of external links within the body of the article (the external links in the Selected Works section are fine, though).
 * This phrase - "Reflecting his commitment to reducing barriers to participation in ..." - is basically sell text that might be fine for a press release or a brochure rack, but is not appropriate for an encyclopedia entry. Further, after reading the source used to support this (the New York Times) it doesn't appear to confirm that Daniels has a "commitment to reducing barriers". Therefore, to simply declare - without any source - that Daniels has a "commitment to reducing barriers" runs afoul either of our policy against original research (if it is based on your own study of Daniels' personality or your observations of him) or our neutral point of view policy (if it originates from a directive by Daniels about the manner or mechanism in which his staff should celebrate him).
 * Chetsford (talk) 06:49, 16 February 2019 (UTC)

Drafting Updates
Hi! Currently undergoing the process of drafting some updates to this article for a WikiEducation class. We've divided the article into additional sections and have added a substantial amount of information. Will post in the upcoming weeks. :) Paigevinch (talk) 01:14, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

POV discussion on Hopkins Police bill
The section on the private police was blanked with a complaint about WP:NPOV not being followed. I just restored the content as the complete deletion of the section and its references did not seem warranted. As the adding editor of most of that section, I am eager to discuss what issues were seen and how (if needed) we can bring it in line with policy. I will say that I do not consider Mr. Daniels' proposal of & prominent advocacy for the bill, nor the criticism of said bill to be irrelevant or POV per se. If there are other sources to bring to bear that will give a fuller picture, let's please discuss them here and integrate them into the article. Sauzer (talk) 15:52, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

Sauzer-- I removed the section that you wrote on this topic in an effort to address the below note on the page from October 2020. I think your section is very clearly written in a way that is not appropriate for a biography. Seems like a blatant violation of Wikipedia's rule about living persons. --Pandemicbaby (talk) 18:04, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

This article reads like a press release or a news article and is largely based on routine coverage or sensationalism. Please expand this article with properly sourced content to meet Wikipedia's quality standards, event notability guideline, or encyclopedic content policy. (October 2020) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pandemicbaby (talk • contribs) 17:54, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi Pandemicbaby, thanks for clarifying your concern. I think it's entirely possible for wording to convey a tone that escapes me as the copy writer, and to the extent that that is the case, we should work to address it. In discussing the bill and its criticism, what passages do you think are written inappropriately? Having re-read it myself a couple times since this morning, the only thing I can quibble with is the passage "the proposal also met with opposition from activists and community leaders" which is arguably a case of weasel words. Digging into the relevant article a little bit more, I think it would be fair to say community associations were divided in their support (Tuscany-Canterbury & Guilford groups supporting, those of Abell, Harwood & Greater Remington opposing), so I would propose revising the sentence to a more specific "However, support among neighborhood associations was divided, and the bill received criticism from activists including" and then continuing on into the copy as written. I'll wait for further discussion and hopefully consensus before making any further edits though. A last note for now - I don't believe the passage is unduly balanced for or against the bill merely because it discusses the criticism and protests of it. It is definitely the case that biographies of living persons are held to high scrutiny, which includes credible citations for any claims. I think that Mr. Daniels' support for the Hopkins police bill is relevant to his tenure at JHU, and every sentence of the section is cited to credible reporting (Baltimore Sun, Baltimore Brew, Washington Post), which is a primary requirement of a BLP. Sauzer (talk) 18:43, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi Sauzer -- The edit you describe and all that sounds reasonable to me per the Wiki rules. Thanks for addressing my suggestion. --Pandemicbaby (talk) 14:11, 28 January 2021 (UTC)