Talk:Ryan Williams (women's soccer)/GA1

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 00:32, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. Overall: Pass

   Pass/Fail:

College career

• In 2014, Williams' freshman year, she was converted to play as a defender,[3] played in 19 matches and started in 18., played twice too close together

• Fixed. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 17:56, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

• She recorded her first collegiate shot and shot on goal, what's the difference? Is the first shot important?

• Removed, the debut was more important. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 17:56, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

Club career

• and Williams was released as a result, and she was allowed to continue training with the Courage, is there another word besides and that can be used?

• Yeah. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 18:52, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

• Can you put ref 55 at the end of the On July 26, Williams participated in the 2018 Women's International Champions Cup, substituting on in the 61st minute against Paris Saint-Germain.

• Done. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 18:52, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

• Could you expand a bit on Williams made her first start in the finals, leading to a 1–0 victory. I feel "Williams" is repeated too soon and an expansion would help.

• Done. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 18:52, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

@HickoryOughtShirt?4: Thanks for the review. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 18:52, 8 June 2020 (UTC)