Talk:Sadie Harris/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 06:26, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

General

 * No dab links. Great work!
 * No dead links. Great work!

Infobox

 * Nothing, really.

Lede

 * Unlink fictional character per WP:OVERLINK
 * ✅,  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "series' producer" isn't it "series creator". Also, with the '.
 * She is also a producer. I chose the word 'producer' because if I said "the character was created by series creator" it would sound redundant. I don't know what you mean by "with '."

Storylines

 * "Harris and Meredith give each other nicknames; "Die" and "Death" respectively." citation/reference needed
 * Per WP:TVPLOT, the episode is the reference.  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "The surgery goes wrong however and Harris' life is seriously endangered, though fortunately she is rescued by the residents." citation/reference needed
 * Per WP:TVPLOT, the episode is the reference.  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "Some time" isn't needed
 * ✅, reworded.  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "claims responsibility for the appendectomy". Awkward
 * ✅, rephrased.  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Meredith should be Grey, as per WP:MOS. Same for various others
 * Meredith and Lexie share the same last name, which is why they are referred to by first name throughout the article.  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Link Europe
 * ✅,  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)

Development

 * you really don't - that's the rule in this town." after don't should be an en-dash rather than a regular -.
 * ✅,  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Too many "of" in the "Characterization" section. Consider re-prashing. Eg: "Writing for Entertainment Weekly, Michael Ausiello"
 * ✅,  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)

Reception

 * There are no issues. Congrats!