Talk:Samsung/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 07:13, 26 April 2017 (UTC)

This long article has a suite of technical problems, indicated by cleanup and citation needed tags in the article, as well as a "this section needs expansion" tag dated September 2015 for Samsung General Chemicals (in fact, that section is empty). Clearly the article should have been scanned and cleaned up before starting the GAN process. The article remains cluttered with many very short sections (some as little as 7 words) on subsidiary and other companies: I started to tidy these up, but there remain many others. The logo section sounds almost like sales talk, I've tagged it for neutrality. Existing tags note that different sections describe activities of subsidiaries without attempting to integrate these into an account of the company as a whole: clearly this would require new sources, in other words the article is in danger of WP:SYNTH. I am therefore halting the GAN process now. The tags in the article indicate which improvements are necessary; it will be good to see the article back at GAN when these have been made. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:13, 26 April 2017 (UTC)