Talk:Shane Osborn

Cleanup message
Bot identified the article as needed cleanup and put the relevant maintenance tags. Please fix the identified problems. If you think the maintenance tags were put in error then just revert the bot's edits. If you have any questions please contact the bot owner.

Yours truly AlexNewArtBot 18:33, 26 March 2007 (UTC)

Editing by Nebraska Chief Information Officer
This edit was made by, which whois shows belongs to the Nebraska state Office of the CIO. RJASE1 Talk  19:18, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
 * The above IP, as well as User:Pearbo (who is adding peacock language to this article) would appear to possibly be Mr. Perry Pirsch, Mr. Osborn's deputy and general counsel. See Conflict of interest/Noticeboard. RJASE1 Talk  20:10, 7 June 2007 (UTC)
 * I have placed the following tags for the following reasons:

My suggestions on how to improve this:
 * Advertising due to the "peacock" language written by the P.R. "flak" employed by the subject of the article, as noted on the Conflict_of_interest/Noticeboard;
 * Original research because it includes quotes from George W. Bush and others, without citing secondary sources, and in fact citing the subject's own recollections; and
 * Point of view because it has an awfully slanted point of view, even worse than others I've and others have tagged.
 * Block the IP of the subject's office.
 * Prevent "ownership" stake by the subject or his emplyees.
 * Carefully monitor the article to keep on the tags until the article is improved.
 * Edit out the laudatory language.
 * Find reliable, secondary sources like newspaper articles and TV shows. Bearian 19:56, 11 June 2007 (UTC)