Talk:Shanghai opera

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Peer Review
Hey Jiajia, it's Xinqiao! I learned a lot about Shanghai opera after reading your article, and I am glad to see the quintessence of Chinese culture would be known by more foreigners. The article is in a pretty good shape. So I can only recommend adding citations about Huju being endangered and for the content in Artistic characteristic section. I would also advise adding a infobox, or at least a photo of perfofmance of Huju to the article. I find a in Wiki Commons. Hope it helps! --XinqiaoCheng (talk) 02:02, 29 October 2016 (UTC)

Hi Jiajia, this is Jing. Your article successfully gives me a full introduction about Huju. Besides, it does drive my interest to explore more about the endangered opera. The article is so well-organized that I can easily find the information I am interested quickly through the title of every section. I really appreciate the last part mentioning the current situation of Huju. But this part does not sound neutral and object, and the sentences are more than emotional. Probably changing sentence structure would work. Hope that helps.Cjweik (talk) 07:02, 29 October 2016 (UTC)