Talk:Siege of Golconda

Neutral issues
The page mostly praises than the information it gives, and its more like a documentary full of praises to a particular thing or a person,and here we have to maintain a balanced article.The page had loads of spelling errors and errors like missing brackets,i tried to correct them and added a little bit more information and made it look more of official,if there are more mistakes or grammatical mistakes please help correct them. The article at many points does nothing but praise somebody,i removed some of the adjectives which were meant for nothing but to praise Mughals or their Qutubshahis.Yes i had to repeat a 'praising' thing again and again because its the only thing,along with some errors that ruin this article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Haider67 (talk • contribs) 13:20, 30 September 2015 (UTC)