Talk:Smoke inhalation

Gasdoc1991 (talk) 22:24, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

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We shouldn't be referencing Indian websites, please reference reputable sources! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.44.5.172 (talk) 23:39, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

--what does it matter that its Indian if the information is correct? --Dasbrick (talk) 20:45, 21 November 2009 (UTC)

Hello fellow Wikipedians. I am a 4th year medical student and will be making edits to update the page making it more robust in content with quality references. Thanks! Gasdoc1991 (talk) 13:18, 5 November 2021 (UTC)Gasdoc1991

I finished the initial bulk of my edits to get this page going in the right direction and with quality sources cited. I upgraded article quality from start to C. If you disagree, feel free to change and give feedback as to why. Thanks! Gasdoc1991 (talk) 22:26, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

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 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20071012055327/http://edoctor.co.in:80/smokeinhalationinj/4522628104 to http://www.edoctor.co.in/smokeinhalationinj/4522628104

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Locking this article
Can someone please lock this article? People are using it to make edits relating to This Is Us, and while it’s a great show, it’s not what this page is about. Cameronszachta (talk) 05:00, 5 February 2018 (UTC)

Agreed. Nearly every time I refresh the history I either see 'User undid revision' or 'updated since my last visit'. It's getting out of hand. AllyGebies (talk) 05:09, 5 February 2018 (UTC)

Yes, Long live Jack Pearson! Glad NBC This Is Us (TV series)] took smoke detectors and inhalation to the mainstream! But Please, stop editing and adding comments. If you want a smoke inhalation media promotion section, use the talk pages here or for This Is Us and make valid points for editors to consider like 45,000,000 households (or whatever the post Super Bowl viewership ended up being, watched and were reminded to change their smoke alarm batteries. P37307 (talk) 05:13, 5 February 2018 (UTC)

I know that people love a particular show or movie, and are sad when a character dies, but vandalizing the page is not needed. It is getting really annoying. AllyGebies (talk) 05:18, 5 February 2018 (UTC)

I have to agree greatly. I am a huge fan of This Is Us, but if we want people to take this topic seriously, we need to lock this article so people can stop vandalizing this page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 199.35.49.169 (talk) 15:53, 5 February 2018 (UTC)

Peer review for smoke inhalation
Whose work are you reviewing? Gasdoc1991

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Smoke inhalation

DrFRahlouni (talk) 22:41, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Lead: Clear and easy to understand. Great expansion of lead and summary of topic.
 * Content: Relevant to topic and up-to-date. Addition of epidemiology and mechanism tied in well.
 * Tone and Balance: Article is written in a neutral and non-biased tone.
 * Sources and references: Relevant sources were used and links work.
 * Organization: Sections of article are well organized in a logical structure, and important aspects of the topic were addressed.
 * Images and media: No images added, but pictures could be helpful. Adding to the infobox may be beneficial.
 * Overall, great work! Strengths demonstrated by this article are the addition of information to the underdeveloped sections and breadth of information covered. I would suggest adding to the infobox and consider adding a section on prevention.