Talk:Sohawa Tehsil

baiwal is part of Sohawa is it not?

Issues with this stub
There are several issues evident with this stub:


 * 1) It contains grammatical errors;
 * 2) The phraseology is not of a standard consistent with how an entry should be written for inclusion in Wikipedia (and by extension, not entirely consistent with norms of contemporary, written speech evident in-vogue at the time of writing);
 * 3) There is evidence of bias on the part of the contributor(s), i.e. the first person is used, exposing the expression of opinions;
 * 4) No references are provided for the numerous assertions made throughout the article;
 * 5) The coverage of material concentrates heavily on specific aspects of the subject matter, while not making this immediately clear to the reader - consider use of headings;
 * 6) The formatting of text is not consistent, e.g. line and paragraph breaks;
 * 7) Consider the use of photographs or external links to make the page more informative.
 * 8) This stub is about Sohawa not Bishandaur. Bishandaurs has its own Prominance and should have a seperate thread. Do not concentrate on one family who does not even live in Sohawa.

Note:baiwal is in Tehsail GujarKhan Distt Rawalpindi

Picture
Why is the picture in the infobox a lotus for this article? RJFJR (talk) 21:56, 4 March 2011 (UTC)