Talk:Sokhta Koh

Article changes
A couple changes this otherwise excellent article needs:

1) The extended quote at the bottom is actually two quotes, and should be presented as such. The length of the quotes is a little too long. The article is copyrighted, it would be better to hold the quotes down to a couple sentences, each. (No, it doesn't matter, for Wikipedia, if you are the original writer, or otherwise own the material, Wikipedia material must be in the public domain.)

2) More footnotes should be added in the text, itself, particularly on statements that might be open to question. See, for example WP:IC.

3) Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and subjective comments that are appropriate in an essay aren't appropriate here. "difficult to appreciate", "rather anemic", "bound to reveal" and "little can be said" are subjective rhetorical devices that don't belong.

That all being said, the article made great reading, and I hope you plan to write more Wiki articles!!

24.130.9.180 (talk) 10:25, 5 July 2008 (UTC)