Talk:St Jerome's Laneway Festival

Other Cities
Other Cities - added Perth and removed comment about it being rumoured to go to other cities in future (as it goes to all the major city stops that are typical for tours of this size already now) Phenalot (talk) 02:17, 21 January 2009 (UTC)

Promotional tone
I completed a fairly extensive revision today, as an avid copyeditor perceived the page as a promotional tool for both the festival and its organisers. Please desist from this in the future, as I wil continue to monitor it. I will also send a message to the editor. Thanks. Regards,--Soulparadox (talk) 14:48, 2 December 2014 (UTC)

This problem has definitely subsisted. Just look at the '2020' section - 'the summer's best line-up', 'wildly popular and hugely entertaining' etc. This is not an impartial discussion of facts, needs to be fixed. 14:22, 16 July 2020 (AWST) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 120.159.220.187 (talk)

Exactly! This is rather a promo text than a NEUTRAL Wikipedia article. Jezabeliberté (talk) 19:14, 22 July 2020 (UTC)