Talk:Tanimura & Antle

"Reads like and advertisement" How so?

"Too Close to the Subject" How so? Author is not, never was, an employee of T&A. Author is familiar with the vicinity and business. Youngnoah (talk) 03:49, 30 January 2018 (UTC)Youngnoah
 * It's mostly about the way the article gushes in a couple of places about all the amazing existence and expertise these people have. These passages are written in a tone of a sort meant to impress. Wikipedia articles shouldn't do that. Largoplazo (talk) 03:53, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

OK, I'll fix that. Youngnoah (talk) 04:12, 30 January 2018 (UTC)Youngnoah
 * This is almost completely a cut-and-paste from Tanimura's obit and Antle's obit. Since you're working on this right now, I'll give you a bit of time to rework it rather remove this WP:COPYVIO completely. --jpgordon&#x1d122;&#x1d106; &#x1D110;&#x1d107; 16:01, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

What's up, Doc?
where does celeb KEVIN antle fit in? both his article and the TV show say he was from the wealthy "antle family", but don't exactly state how.

is he another son of bob simply not mentioned here, or is he a cousin or nephew or something? i notice a total lack of ANY "kevin" in this article.

and shouldn't there be a "see also" link to his article down the bottom? 2601:19C:5280:5BA7:6579:9224:C564:43CC (talk) 13:24, 19 April 2022 (UTC)