Talk:Tennessee/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:48, 27 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add WP:ALT text to every image before used in this article.
 * ✅ - please let me know if these are adequate. For multiple images, not sure if I should do an alt for each image, or an alt for the footer. Bneu2013 (talk) 05:43, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "the first permanent European settlers".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "in order to" "to" (less wordy)
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Add WP:DATECOMMAS after "February 24, 1794", "January 17, 1796", and "June 1, 1796".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "A number of" "Several" (less wordy)
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "homes in southeastern Tennessee".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a hyphen between "second highest".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "a crucial state during the war".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "After Abraham Lincoln's election as president" "After Abraham Lincoln was elected president"
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "In an effort to pay off debts" "To pay off debts"
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "afterwards" "afterward" (American English)
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "the largest electric utility in the country".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "abundancy" "abundance"
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Add "the" before "natural separation".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "$1 billion".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:52, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "This area consists linear parallel ridges" "This area consists of linear parallel ridges"
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "Appalachian Plateau".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "and turning northwest to Clarksville and" – double and
 * ✅ - also added Oxford Comma after "Clarksville". Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Add "the" before "U.S. Army Corps of Engineers".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Highest average monthly precipitation" "The highest average monthly precipitation"
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "13.4% 65 or older" "13.4% were 65 or older"
 * ✅ - also added "were" after "23.6%". Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a hyphen between "fastest growing".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 05:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "2,683,214".
 * ✅ - also update figure. Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Add hyphens between "right to work".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "as low-tax state" "as a low-tax state"
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "a rate of 6%".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "to between" "between"
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "concentrated on the Cumberland Plateau".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "the largest manufacturing sector in Tennessee".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a comma after "corporate headquarters".
 * - the issue was the word "in" was missing; Franklin is the location of the headquarters. Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a hyphen between "second largest".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Stax records" "Stax Records"
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:07, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a hyphen between "longest running".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:07, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "maintaning" – typo
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:08, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "roads or bridges".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:08, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a hyphen between "two thirds".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:10, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "legal in Tennessee".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:10, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "Democratic Solid South".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:10, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Search for WP:ALLCAPS, WP:QWQ, and WP:CURLY in citations.
 * ✅ - fixed the all-caps in citations. There doesn't appear to be any instances of the latter two; however, I don't think I have access to a tool to check. Bneu2013 (talk) 06:28, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * ✅ - Bneu2013 (talk) 06:35, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:32, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
 * - I have addressed all the issues listed here. Please let me know if there are still any issues. Bneu2013 (talk) 06:35, 28 July 2021 (UTC)