Talk:The Blue Guitar

Reviewer’s comments
This article is full of very interesting material but it does have some issues.

* odd and inconsistent citation style, with some references correctly formatted as footnotes while others are left in the main text

* a lot of the material doesn’t seem to be about the topic, and is general background or things going on at the same time. This makes the article unfocused and confusing to read.

* Sone of the important material about the topic isn’t referenced

Thanks Mccapra (talk) 05:38, 3 March 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you @Mccapra, I've moved the references that were in the main text, to the footnotes. I've also increased the number of references in the main text, please do point out any parts that need more. I do think the background and story behind the suite is important to understand it and those involved.
 * ArtDataArt (talk) 23:13, 4 March 2023 (UTC)