Talk:Toa Payoh MRT station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:45, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all, nice and neat. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:09, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Link Toa Payoh in the lead.
 * " a set of colourful tiles " coloured perhaps (colourful sounds like a tourist brochure).
 * "Exit D of Toa Payoh MRT station." no full stop required, it's a fragment.
 * "to relief the" relieve.
 * "Thomson-Sembawang" -> "Thomson–Sembawang"
 * "Novena stations and" is there a link for Novena?
 * "S$96.8 million (US$45.81.." as per the other review, reduce $ conversion to 1 decimal place for this and others.
 * Could link topping out.
 * "As an effort for people to get familiar.." -> "In an effort to familiarise people with..."
 * " sneak preview" no need "sneak", not encyclopedic.
 * ""987. About 44,000 people" merge with "during which time"
 * "During the opening, Toa Payoh ..." station is mentioned three times in this one sentence... repetitive.
 * "has been replaced" ->"was replaced".
 * "The name, Toa Payoh, means..." -> "Toa Payoh means..."
 * "Interchange, HDB Hub,[34] " HDB Hub can be linked here (and in the lead)
 * "the Braddell and " link?
 * "Concourse level of the station." no full stop required, it's a fragment.
 * " Giving a sense of movement, the rainbow colours represent various races" delete, the next sentence covers it more encyclopedically.
 * Ref 26 has a spaced hyphen, should be en-dash.
 * Ref 24, work should be in italics.
 * It says "Opened 7 November 1987" in infobox but then it says "The station opened for passenger service on 7 November 1989" is this a typo?
 * Thanks for the review so far. Addressed the points above.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:02, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
 * No worries, looks good to me, so I'm promoting. Good work. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:40, 8 March 2021 (UTC)