Talk:Toshio Saeki

Citation and Expansion
This article is underdeveloped and undersourced, and requires significant attention. The article itself needs to be rewritten and reorganized. The article on Jason Vorhees is the best example of a well developed and organized character article. There is a lot of information that is unsourced and should either be given proper citations (if it's kept in the rewrite) or removed entirely if no reliable sources are found. The article is missing important information on the character's development which needs to be added to the article. This should be added as follows: Concept and creation (Section) Birth of a Horror Icon(Sub-Section) Development (Sub-section)

Children Behind the Black Eyed Stare (Sub-section)[Can be titled something else since this is about the actors who've portrayed the character]

Like many articles on Japanese Horror characters, this has potential of becoming GA and FA status if enough attention is given to it. Hopefully someone comes along and gives this one the attention it needs.--Paleface Jack 16:30, 10 January 2018 (UTC)