Talk:TrueBliss

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This article is extremely poorly written. A revision of this is urgently required. Here are just a few examples of where a dictionary would have benefited the author.

"Five unknowen girls" (Do I have to elaborate further?) "She also opened a hair braiding shop in Dunedin she ran herself" (No! Really?) "Her new album 'So Radiate' was released on 3 July 2006" (Doesn't seem very new does it?) "In 2007, both Joe and Keri are competing in Pop's Ultimate Star. Keri was the first contestant to be eliminated. Joe Cotton went on to win this competition." (Just which tense did you plan to write this in?)