Talk:Tseax Cone/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Grungaloo (talk · contribs) 19:52, 17 January 2024 (UTC)

Hi, I'm picking this review up. I'll ping you in a few days when I'm done! grungaloo (talk) 19:52, 17 January 2024 (UTC)


 * Hey, this is an easy pass. The article is well written (I apologize if my comments were nitpicky), it strikes a great balance between broadness and detail, and my source spot check is all good. There's nothing here even remotely close to requiring rework, and I think it's well on its way to being FA if that's where you intend to take it.
 * Excellent work, and congratulations! grungaloo (talk) 20:50, 18 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

 * - What's meant by "medium-sized lakes" here? There's no mention of "large-sized lakes" so are these the biggest in the region? Consider explaining this further or saying their the largest lakes in the area for clarity.
 * Reworded. Volcanoguy 17:23, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
 * - Swap "a lava flow" for "most lava flow sequences". Minor nitpick, but the source indicates that lichen/moss covers most of the lava flows, the way this is written sounds like it only covers a singular lava flow.
 * A lava flow sequence would be a collection of lava flows. Volcanoguy 17:23, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
 * - Sounds says that ponds exist, not sure what's meant by ponded.
 * See pond: "To block the flow of water so that it can escape only through evaporation or seepage; to dam." Volcanoguy 17:44, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
 * - swap the semicolon for an "and".
 * I think it's fine how it is. Volcanoguy 17:48, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
 * - Swap this around a bit: "as the climate becomes increasingly wetter and milder"
 * That doesn't seem to flow too well with the rest of the sentence. <i style="color: red;">Volcano</i><i style="color: black;">guy</i> 17:53, 18 January 2024 (UTC)