Talk:Turkey and the World Bank

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Hi Mary, Your article looks good to me aside from a few features. I would definitely read your article out loud and make needed corrections, as the grammar and syntax seems a little bit off. Also, some sentences seem biased, and may need further proof: "largest middle-income countries associated with the group, as well as one of the most established economies around the globe." Although you cited the source, the phrase stands on shaky ground and needs more proof. Organizing the structure of the article may also help with making the article clearer to read. Otherwise, the facts and your sources seem legitimate. Best, Racheladiaz (talk) 20:53, 7 June 2017 (UTC)Racheladiaz

(Peer Review | Proof) I would avoid seemingly broad language -- ie: "means of providing development". There are only one or two other examples of this. Also, it is not required, but I would try to explore a bit more of the academic tools we studied in class. This would provide a much more substantive, distinguishing (but still balanced) perspective on your new entries. Altogether, your paragraphs are sound. You do a good job at using unbiased language with neutral connotations, and supplement findings with objective numbers well. DanishKringle (talk) 07:28, 8 June 2017 (UTC)

I think the explanation is missing few details. -I feel like I am having a similar issue with my page- In my opinion, the first paragraph is too general. for example, 1) it is not measurable how WBG effort and contribution for a series of port construction and its commercial economy have been made during 1950 and 2017 since WB may be not the only source for its development. 2) the economic climate is explained in the last sentence, but the fact and source do not explain how this is related to the World BankJinhyuk Lee (talk) 06:52, 10 June 2017 (UTC)Jinhyuk Lee

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