Talk:United Arab Emirates/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 02:59, 18 August 2012 (UTC)

Will do it shortly!  TheSpecialUser TSU 02:59, 18 August 2012 (UTC)

Quick-Fail: Here are just few points that make this article appear nowhere near a GA.


 * Lead- pretty bad. Not only poorly written, I'm not getting a flow and things just seem to come up one after another. It needs a re-write.
 * Sources- Large number of them won't considered as WP:RS by me.
 * Ref need- Many facts need ref.
 * Prose- It is not good enough and needs copyediting.
 * Neutrality- There exists few peacock terms and some lines doesn't make me comfortable as they need to be written from a NPOV.
 * Odd note with no ref
 * See also section has too many extra things
 * The article is full with maintenance tags and many are needed.

 TheSpecialUser TSU 15:31, 21 August 2012 (UTC)