Talk:United Nations Office for Disaster Risk Reduction

Risk Knowledge
I'm starting a talk page thread here in case further discussion is needed since ultimately this is where article content issues should be resolved.

My concern regarding promotion arose primarily due to the inclusion of an inline link to the studio producing the game. Under most circumstances the identity of the studio responsible for production is just too incidental to be worth mentioning in an article that is about another topic entirely, at best it comes across as shoehorned-in digression. Further, even if the game itself is mentioned, linking to the studios website is almost never going to be appropriate. A secondary factor was supporting the inclusion of the game using only the game's own website, with no secondary sources characterizing the relationship, which appears to be someone stuffing in info about something they like.

I see you followed my advice to post over at the teahouse; that's good, hopefully someone will be along soon to work through the sources to help you draft an edit with appropriate attention to WP:WEIGHT. I apologize that I am unable to be of assistance myself for a at least a few weeks here, I know this can be a confusing place for newcomers to navigate. With luck someone else will be with you soon, and you can work out any issues as they arise below. 74.73.224.126 (talk) 02:14, 16 June 2023 (UTC)