Talk:Urban agriculture in West Oakland

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 August 2021 and 17 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kalinatodorov. Peer reviewers: SjolieW1, Imanqadir.

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Student Comments
Rewording racial groups I think certain sentences could be reworded (re: "the Oakland Housing Authority established housing projects for blacks in West Oakland and whites in East Oakland") to use better terminology referring to racial groups, but I'm not sure how to change this. Thoughts? This sentence also lacks a reference. --Kalinatodorov (talk) 02:20, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Objectivity I think some sentences (re: The creation of the People of Color Greening Network (PCGN) in the 1990s was a pivotal moment for urban agriculture in West Oakland) could be reworded to reduce subjectivity. --Kalinatodorov (talk) 02:20, 4 December 2021 (UTC)